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| Graveside Rose 2007-12-30 ch 3,  | abuseAww a peresistant ((yes I suck at spelling but luckley when it comes to writing word has spell check lol)) Little man. Thats so cute! AWW! Squee! |
| pero-pero 2007-09-25 ch 3, | abusewhat? you couldn't possibly stop there. that's so cruel. any plans in finishing this? and you write so damn well! how about heavenward?? any plans in finishing that too?? oh please... you got me completely hook up on you. |
| Venus Immortelle 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseomfg is there more?! face down, hahah good song, i knew it was that from the beginning i just couldn't be sure to the end. what a hot ending =] |
| UnOriginal 2006-12-11 ch 3, | abuseOH Chandra me love him ACK! Gavin go go go lol and have some smex muwahahhaha ... plz update =] |
| Liisha2theMoon 2006-10-30 ch 2, | abuseHehehehe... the last line made me laugh... I like it very very much. |
| PurpleAjah 2006-10-13 ch 2, | abuselol... Stupid me did not read the last line before clicking 'submit review' last time. Chandra is an unusual name oO Stupid barbie clone... n.n Gavin is a funny name. (sorry if you like the name, but I still find it extreamly amuseing (small things amuse small minds)). Chandra is a bit bold and spontainious, isn't he? XD Like his style. -ajah |
| PurpleAjah 2006-10-13 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh... your characters are just amazing! I love them! -glomps...- wait. I don't know his name! That one with the ipod was just awesome. -cuddles- Too bad he is gay... I suppose... lol. Be aware that I don't usually fall in love with a character so quickly. Go you! I will definately keep reading... and since there is another chapter there already, I am more then happy n.n ...usually I would give some sort of constructive critisism, but I can't think of any xp -ajah |
| PoeticRagdoll 2006-10-06 ch 2, | abuseI Love it more soon please lol I want to know what happens next |
| Esquirella 2006-10-05 ch 2, | abuseLOL! Poor Gavin! He doesn't know what's hit him, does he? |
| obsidiandreams 2006-10-04 ch 2, | abuseThe ending is made of win. |
| fantasyfaery 2006-10-04 ch 2, | abuseHahaha*LMAO* That last bit was really good! By-the-by, you've been redeemed! Bless you for updating so fast. Now about the next chapter... :> |
| fantasyfaery 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseOh! That was so dirty! You can't write something that good that short ( or a least multi-chaptered update ). Wow, so intrigued. I hope you update soon! |
| obsidiandreams 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuse"...headphone cord swinging and hitting a random person in the face." I like this story! I like the randomness of the kiss. And then he walks into a random doorway- was the door actually open, or is he just standing there? Hm. |