Ahaha, William totally deserved it. He's lucky to have a boyfriend who doesn't beat his ass like he should when he's cheated on. And that was so adorable, the closest scene, where he's like, "His lips left my skin, and he suddenly wasn't there anymore." You just want to laugh out loud - it's total dramatic irony, even for the moment or two he was confused, how the reader know that he was left alone in the closet, while he hadn't figured it out yet.

Cute

Sheer brilliance, a lovely little snippet of life.

hahahahahahahahahahahaha...wow. that was great. i liked this alot.

:)

LMAO! Yeah, that was funny. Loved it.

lmao. that is amazing :D

Haha, so adorable~ XD This is so something I would do to someone! CX

I love the "please be mad" line. It made me giggle throughout the rest of the fic~

I'm definitely reading your other one-shots. :D

Jimmy's a keeper. Damn. He's committed and willing to put someone's ass in line...or bare and in a closet, whatever. Hehe, got my vote for totally-awesome award. Which I just made up. What!? Well, if I had a totally awesome award, I'd give it to Jimmy.

Revenge, so sweet, and yet Jimmy seems really loving all the while. I don't think Billy deserves him.

>.< So funny. Poor guy, though. I mean the boyfriend... *shakes head sadly*

I like the way you write your one-shots, it's a style I'm not used to, and a welcome break from the second person narratives. And your topic is hilarious. Not a perfect made-in-heaven couple (bleh, lol) and not a typical problem (how many boyfriends in other stories continued to stay with cheater after they find out?) and a humorous solution to the problem. lol, a thoughrly enjoyable read!

I think what made me laugh the most was the mere fact that the main character's name is Billy (or, rather, William). And, as you probably know from reviewing my own story, I also have a character named Billy (again, William). xD Who is a complete and total prude. Who doesn't drink. Who doesn't have a boyfriend. Ah, it great seeing a Billy in another light.

Despite that, I loved it. Funny concept, hysterical execution. =)

Oh my... that's was clever and cute. ^_^ One of the best one-shots I've read. Good good.

Lol^^

James is still pretty understanding.

Anyway you know I love this one.

Ha. I like how you used the beginning part with the "let me tell you my story" thing at the end. ^_^

And I hate my mother.

AND! My grandmother.

AND! I have no idea what I was going to say because of them. Damn it all.

Oh.

Haha a good lesson for him. If I were him, I would've done worse. Got him naked and pushed him out in the hall. HA! BWAAHAHA!

xo