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Half-BloodGrlPirate
2007-08-24
ch 1,
abusehahahahahahahahahahahaha...wow. that was great. i liked this alot.

:)
ks darkstorm
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseLMAO! Yeah, that was funny. Loved it.
iwishillwilluponyou
2007-04-11
ch 1,
abuselmao. that is amazing :D
Karasu-sama
2007-04-02
ch 1,
abuseHaha, so adorable~ XD This is so something I would do to someone! CX

I love the "please be mad" line. It made me giggle throughout the rest of the fic~

I'm definitely reading your other one-shots. :D
Venustas iaceo
2007-02-19
ch 1,
abuseJimmy's a keeper. Damn. He's committed and willing to put someone's ** in line...or bare and in a closet, whatever. Hehe, got my vote for totally-awesome award. Which I just made up. What!? Well, if I had a totally awesome award, I'd give it to Jimmy.

Revenge, so sweet, and yet Jimmy seems really loving all the while. I don't think Billy deserves him.
Rosuto Aki
2007-01-11
ch 1, anon.
abuse>.< So funny. Poor guy, though. I mean the boyfriend... *shakes head sadly*
In Darkest Night
2006-11-26
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you write your one-shots, it's a style I'm not used to, and a welcome break from the second person narratives. And your topic is hilarious. Not a perfect made-in-heaven couple (bleh, lol) and not a typical problem (how many boyfriends in other stories continued to stay with cheater after they find out?) and a humorous solution to the problem. lol, a thoughrly enjoyable read!
In This Shindig
2006-10-11
ch 1,
abuseI think what made me laugh the most was the mere fact that the main character's name is Billy (or, rather, William). And, as you probably know from reviewing my own story, I also have a character named Billy (again, William). xD Who is a complete and total prude. Who doesn't drink. Who doesn't have a boyfriend. Ah, it great seeing a Billy in another light.

Despite that, I loved it. Funny concept, hysterical execution. =)
Rachizzle
2006-10-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh my... that's was clever and cute. ^_^ One of the best one-shots I've read. Good good.
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2006-10-04
ch 1,
abuseLol^^
Kasee Lara
2006-10-03
ch 1,
abuseJames is still pretty understanding.

Anyway you know I love this one.
SerialXLain
2006-10-03
ch 1,
abuseHa. I like how you used the beginning part with the "let me tell you my story" thing at the end. ^_^

And I hate my mother.

AND! My grandmother.

AND! I have no idea what I was going to say because of them. Damn it all.

Oh.

Haha a good lesson for him. If I were him, I would've done worse. Got him naked and pushed him out in the hall. HA! BWAAHAHA!

xo
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