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| clooless 2006-10-05 ch 1,  | abuseHey pascy! Guess who? I'll give you one clue: TWINNY! I didn't know you had fanfiction although I should have expected it, LOL |
| CynicalKim 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou had many grammatical errors, your description for the story was weak, and "Wasa" should never be used in any form of writing because it makes it look cheap, unprofessional and childish.Don't put lyrics in your bloody story, because once again, it's unprofessional. If you have writing aspirations, I suggest you find a new dream, you have a long way to go. |