you seriuosly got my attention with this! excellent writeing great job=]

Wow...this is a really good piece! really well described. as in, not necessarily the background, but the whole meaning behind it. i would never have gone to one of those sleepovers!(i think the mirror was evil!!...okay..i know its not :| ) and a dangerously low v-neck...i would never wear those either. mostly because i am not the cleavage-baring type. at all. and mini-skirts...uhm..yeah...no. Anyhow, you really captured my attention with this, and the everything went along smoothly =) i got the end part of it pretty good. obviously john didn't like what he saw anymore. 10/10 =D
-vesta =]

Hey luv. I'm in Personal Finance right now, so this is going to be short. I really liked your piece -- it was interesting the way you described the sleepover (they just sat in front of a mirror all night?) and how John saw the change right away.Poor Linda for losing him!Liked the continuing references to mirrors too.

See you soon . . . .

Guillemot