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| falling.without.care 2008-07-23 ch 13,  | abuseI really wish you would update...cause it's been FOREVER and EVER and EVER EVER! Update! Seriously! :) please :) |
| Sarah 2008-01-04 ch 13, anon. | abusePLEASE UPDATE! i want to know what he has to tell her! Your story is really good!! I LOVE ALL OF THEM! |
| Enaid 2007-12-17 ch 13, | abuseplease update. u said that u would update soon on this one but the last update was march. this one is so good. updateupdateupdate |
| evillittledevil56 2007-11-25 ch 13, | abuseUPDATE VERY SOON PLEASE! I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES! |
| X-Romantic-X 2007-10-25 ch 13, | abuseDoes tragedy means someone dies in the end? Because this looks good but I don't want anyone to die... |
| Militarylver4eva 2007-07-17 ch 13, | abuseOH... A CLIFFHANGER! JUST WHEN THINGS WHERE GETTING GOOD. LOL. OH WELL... JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I LOVE THIS STORY. IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES. PLEASE UPDATE THIS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. JUST DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. LOL. MILITARYLVER4EVA :) |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-16 ch 13, | abuseAW, come on! Cliffhanger accomplished.. now update! - LL |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. Very good. Just one thing: "argues" should be "arguments", and by "Epilogue" I think you mean "Prologue," which comes before the story, while an epilogue is afterwards. Please don't think I'm a critical **, cause I really am enjoying this! - LL |
| Tia 2007-05-07 ch 13, anon. | abuseTruthfully, when I read the review I wasn't sure I would like this story. But good lord! You can write! lol I really like it alot. Not too much drama but just a tad to keep things going ya know? I cannot wait until the next update. Keep up the great work. Take Care, -Tia |
| ALBiN0 2007-04-15 ch 13, | abuseWell, I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this story! Great idea for a plot, too. |
| DarkSweetRose 2007-04-06 ch 13, | abusehey i'm lovin this story. omg i want to know more... and i do have a feelin wat chris mite tell her or ask her lol.. plz plz plz update soon! i'll be waiting.. and i hope its' not late for u to update :) plz update soon asap.. keep it up too btw.. lol lovin it |
| Black Pearl n Shadowz 2007-03-20 ch 13, | abusewell you have to admmit you did make her seem a bit naive for a bit, but i cant wait for her to really break out..:P |
| wow 2007-03-12 ch 13, anon. | abuseITS AWSOME, LOVE IT! i really do, please update sooner last time was way to long, i LOVE THIS CHAPTER IT ** ROCKS! |
| Shadow of the Black Wolf 2007-03-11 ch 13, | abuseWell jeez..short and a cliffhanger. Couldn't I have gotten a heads-up or something? :P jk Not really. :D Anyways, I think I know what he's going to tell her and what they will do if she accepts it. I'm almost positive she will. I liked it though and yea, I hope you do update soon. Waiting.. |
| Liquid-Sorrow 2007-03-10 ch 13, | abuseaww. Yea, it was short, but at least we're getting somewhere! =) Madison and Chris are amazing. I have a question, though. What does Madison really DO at the Body Shop? I've gotten a slight impression, but I'm not completely sure. =) Well, just asking. Update soon? -Lqd |