   LovingBlackParadise1 2009-10-21 . chapter 14i love this story but i wish you would have written the sex scene .. sad sad sad .. update soon |
 Winter92 2008-08-15 . chapter 14I like this story |
 falling.without.care 2008-08-12 . chapter 14ohmygosh ohmygosh ohmygosh
you updated yay! yay! yay!
AWESOME GREAT AMAZING SUPERB TERRIFIC
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON! |
 Honest Abe 2008-08-12 . chapter 14 wow that was a really long wait...lol
but its absolutely amazin (chappie)
and I hope to god you update again (like the next few days)
:) please |
| falling.without.care 2008-07-23 . chapter 13 I really wish you would update...cause it's been FOREVER and EVER and EVER EVER!
Update! Seriously!
:) please :) |
| Sarah 2008-01-04 . chapter 13 PLEASE UPDATE! i want to know what he has to tell her! Your story is really good!! I LOVE ALL OF THEM! |
 Enaid 2007-12-17 . chapter 13please update. u said that u would update soon on this one but the last update was march. this one is so good. updateupdateupdate |
 evillittledevil56 2007-11-25 . chapter 13UPDATE VERY SOON PLEASE!
I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES! |
 evilbunniez 2007-10-25 . chapter 13Does tragedy means someone dies in the end? Because this looks good but I don't want anyone to die... |
 Militarylver4eva 2007-07-17 . chapter 13OH... A CLIFFHANGER! JUST WHEN THINGS WHERE GETTING GOOD. LOL. OH WELL... JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I LOVE THIS STORY. IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES. PLEASE UPDATE THIS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. JUST DYING TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. LOL.
MILITARYLVER4EVA :) |
 Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-16 . chapter 13AW, come on! Cliffhanger accomplished.. now update!
- LL |
| Murphy's Lawyer 2007-06-16 . chapter 1 This is good. Very good. Just one thing: "argues" should be "arguments", and by "Epilogue" I think you mean "Prologue," which comes before the story, while an epilogue is afterwards. Please don't think I'm a critical **, cause I really am enjoying this!
- LL |
| Tia 2007-05-07 . chapter 13 Truthfully, when I read the review I wasn't sure I would like this story.
But good lord! You can write! lol I really like it alot. Not too much drama but just a tad to keep things going ya know?
I cannot wait until the next update.
Keep up the great work.
Take Care,
-Tia |
 ALBiN0 2007-04-15 . chapter 13Well, I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this story! Great idea for a plot, too. |
 DarkSweetRose 2007-04-06 . chapter 13hey i'm lovin this story. omg i want to know more... and i do have a feelin wat chris mite tell her or ask her lol.. plz plz plz update soon! i'll be waiting.. and i hope its' not late for u to update :) plz update soon asap.. keep it up too btw.. lol lovin it |
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