i love the title... and the first line: spit.choke.vomit.bleed... amazing way to start this... and i liked how it ended... 'but dont worry because i dont expect anything soon' it hurts.
oh god. this is horrible, in the sense that its just so painful and heartfelt. I love the way it opens with the italics. And sunshine, suicide is never worth it. Keep writing always, and thanks for your review. ~Bex xx
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