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| no one 2006-12-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is REALLY good. OMG, like I about cried. Wow. Even if you've never done something exactly like this, you can definately relate, especially with those negative words/thoughts or thinking you're not good enough. I think you should add another line in or two though, like something along the lines of an eating disorder or drugs/drinking or dating or something, because people can be the same way in that sort of thing too. |
| amillionlittlepieces 2006-10-18 ch 1,  | abuse...*stares at screen speachlesslly* That was simply amazing. I liked the last part... this is so, oh I dunno, Perfect...I dont know what else to say... |
| Blazing Icecrystals 2006-10-03 ch 1, | abuseThat's so tragic, but it really does parallel what goes through the thought process at times. Good job. Great theme, and you carried your topic well. |