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| TuneOut 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseI think this story is perfection. It's a love story that doesn't have any of that cringe factor from the overdramatic and cheesy plotlines. I love how the guy in a band fell for a quiet, sociology studying girl. It's very charming. |
| KnittingKneedle 2008-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHi, this review is brought to you by the review marathon (link is on my profile) You have a really great original voice that helped this story to stand apart on it's own. Some of the lines came off as a little...I'm not sure if cheesy is the right word and I wish you'd shown how eccentric the boy was rather than just telling. You captured the awkwardness of first meetings that many authors overlook- I never like it when they get *too* familiar *too* soon, but you handled this perfectly well. Great job! |
| cls81690 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's absolutely amazingly sweet. It's awkward, cute, and genuinely funny. I like it. There's a good succession of events, and I like that it's more of a moment than a saga in short story form. It's a wonderful moment. |
| Lovedward48 2008-01-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOhu, it's really cute! I like it!^^ |
| xonea 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusei loved this. It was short and sweet! xD |
| druggieaddict 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting and captivating start. I would definitely like to see more. Good job, and update soon! :D If it's not too much of a bother, please take a look at my stuff! Thanks! |
| ess3sandra 2007-09-20 ch 1, | abusesweet, me like, have you seen 40 days and 40 nights, the movie sucks, but theay also meat in a laundry place thingy. and the girl that played the nice girl, shes really cool. good one-shot, well done. |
| ophelia 2007-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw! |
| MizSphinx 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuse...I mean if I don't add this to my favourites it would be a crime. An INJUSTICE. Totally and completely UNFAIR! ...errm...roite. This was short, sweet and to the point and I loved it. I especially LOVED that his name's Adam and her's Amelie...you know...the A-A thing...yeah I guess you did that on purpose. So -:click:- Favs! --MizSphinx |
| Kimberli Kitten 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. I like how they met in a laundromat, not a cofeeshop. It adds originality. |
| -insertsomethinguniquehere- 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abusethis is cute. |
| gulistanlik 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, seriously, I'm loving your one-shots. They cute little things. Me likes. :D |
| That Heather Chick 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abusedude... i like this! your style is awesome, and i wish i had your knack for titling stories. |
| :) 2007-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abusehahahaha. I've done lots of laundrying on Friday nights with textbooks. I hate parties. When I get dressed up I look like a ** girl but really I'm a LetMeStudy girl. Yeh, geek. So I never imagine this will happen but if it did, I'd kinda be like that girl. Maybe not so shy. Fun story. You must really like eyes. |
| multiples of six 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseHaha, too cute! =D |