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BahamutsTear
2008-04-20
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abuseNice, it's always good to pwn writers block. ;)
Beauty From Pain
2008-04-15
ch 1,
abuseWow...that was amazing. I loved it. =)
Dramaqueen-is-me-14
2008-04-09
ch 1,
abusereally good!
daughterofmusic
2008-01-21
ch 1,
abuseTaken the right way, this could be a very dark poem... but I like how you applied it to writer's block!! (Don't you hate that??)
Keep it up!
~Daughter of Music
Michelladora
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuse"There's more for me than you" just screams out independence and strength. it's an amazing poem.
hateandkill-D
2007-01-21
ch 1,
abuseCool. Nice job on this.
Aella88
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseWow. I can't believe you wrote that about Writer's block. I can definitely see how it applies, but still, wow! The things I think of when I read it is unrequited love, or an abusive relationship, or the need to be perfect and what everybody expects of you. *grins* Great job!
Dr-Pepper-2008
2006-10-23
ch 1,
abusewow Thats really good. Sorry you had writter's block...I hope it will pass. lol Talk to you soon!
silentscreamer07
2006-10-04
ch 1,
abuse*yay!* *leaps for joy* You posted something...

FINALLY!

*Shesh* took ya long enough ;) haha. But I loved this one! The title was very awesome too, because it makes me think of wings...why? I'm not 100% sure why, but it does. Maybe the word free makes me think of "flying free" which reminds me of wings? haha anyways.

But I can really tell you've been listening to evanescense through this poem. It seems like they were the *inspiration* to you behind this poem. I just got down listening to one of her songs, and there was a line in there about "beating you at your own game" which reminds me of your 2nd line. Great poem though! I really like it!

You're NOT ALLOWED *repeat* NOT ALLOWED to delete this poem! From now on, you only POST, you DO NOT DELETE! haha

*keep writing* I hope you've gotten read of the writer blocks virus :D haha Talk to ya later! Buhbyes

~Britney
Princess-anna57
2006-10-04
ch 1,
abuseGreat job mate! I can relate in some ways. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
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