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| BahamutsTear 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseNice, it's always good to pwn writers block. ;) |
| Beauty From Pain 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was amazing. I loved it. =) |
| Dramaqueen-is-me-14 2008-04-09 ch 1, | abusereally good! |
| daughterofmusic 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseTaken the right way, this could be a very dark poem... but I like how you applied it to writer's block!! (Don't you hate that??) Keep it up! ~Daughter of Music |
| Michelladora 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuse"There's more for me than you" just screams out independence and strength. it's an amazing poem. |
| hateandkill-D 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseCool. Nice job on this. |
| Aella88 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. I can't believe you wrote that about Writer's block. I can definitely see how it applies, but still, wow! The things I think of when I read it is unrequited love, or an abusive relationship, or the need to be perfect and what everybody expects of you. *grins* Great job! |
| Dr-Pepper-2008 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abusewow Thats really good. Sorry you had writter's block...I hope it will pass. lol Talk to you soon! |
| silentscreamer07 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuse*yay!* *leaps for joy* You posted something... FINALLY! *Shesh* took ya long enough ;) haha. But I loved this one! The title was very awesome too, because it makes me think of wings...why? I'm not 100% sure why, but it does. Maybe the word free makes me think of "flying free" which reminds me of wings? haha anyways. But I can really tell you've been listening to evanescense through this poem. It seems like they were the *inspiration* to you behind this poem. I just got down listening to one of her songs, and there was a line in there about "beating you at your own game" which reminds me of your 2nd line. Great poem though! I really like it! You're NOT ALLOWED *repeat* NOT ALLOWED to delete this poem! From now on, you only POST, you DO NOT DELETE! haha *keep writing* I hope you've gotten read of the writer blocks virus :D haha Talk to ya later! Buhbyes ~Britney |
| Princess-anna57 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat job mate! I can relate in some ways. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |