please carry on! =]

Hmm, it's a strange idea but I'll stick with it for now.
Good set up.
One or two little mistakes but a good start. I shall read on.
A. :)

I screamed when I read the last part.
Love the story. ;] Update real soon .

I AM STILL READING!

Now I have gotten that out of the way, OH GOD. Rogue! I am still unsure as to whether I like him or not, but, no, he can't die! And poor Shaun, god. Less of a wait? Please. Please very much.
I am still reading.

I love this story!! I especially love Rogue and Shaun, please update soon?

fantastic story, keep it up :)

I love your story so Much! I started reading it awhile back -with no account- and then when I finally got one I had forgotten what this was called and YES I found it! *does a very very happy dance* I love this so much and can't wait for the next update :D

I love this story so much. I'm actually still reading it (as well as everything else of yours), it's just taking me a bit, cuz my laptop is broken. So it's hard to actually get time to read all of my fictionpress updates.

Keep up the good work!

I'm a totally hooked!

woah! this is one of the best story's i have read so far on here! its really really good! keep writting! :)

Wow! Heaven knows, this is one of the best stories I've ever read on this website. Seriously, I lack words to describe how beautiful this story is or how much I love it.

*You better update soon or I will hunt you down :D and you will regret that you forgot to mention that I and not only Rogue survived Phaos's Lab :D *

Please UPDATE SOON.

Ok, well first I have to tell that this story is great. I really like it. But everyone will eventually get a happy ending right? I really hope so. Anyway great story

I have to say. this story is probably the most addicting story I have read yet!
I noticed you start out a lot of chapters saying that you're sorry the chapter is so terrible but I think every chapter was very well writen. The detail and imagery is very clear! :)
The characters are also very real, they all make mistakes, they aren't perfect and it's so easy to get attached to them.
This story is always unpredictable and that makes it very exciting! You never really know who is going to end up with who, or how they are going to make it work. We never expect a thing! I'm always really dissapointed when I reach the end.
I'm so sad that the most recent chapter ended there. I'm really anxious to find out what happens next!


Update Soon!

Looking forward to the next update.

I just finished your story and I really LOVE it. The plot is great, the characters are awesome. I love Sebatian and Shaun and Rogue. And this is really well written!
I can't wait to read the next one.
thank you for sharing your story ^__^