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| JLRivera 2008-09-02 ch 17,  | abuseHey, really enjoying the fic, whether or not you feel it's rubbish. This is going to sound rather bitchy but can you please stop apologizing for mediocre work? We're all practically salivating for this story, you have no reason to apologize. Mkay, onto the actual review: I think you could stand to describe surroundings in a bit more detail, it'll really help the flow as you move from one area to another and solidify images in your readers' minds. I'm sure you're aware, but you've got some typos here and there that spellcheck and a quick proofread will solve. Or get a grammar/spelling nazi beta to do it for you. I'll even offer up my services if I get to read updates faster. :D Characters: Hmm, I think I love them. I find your characters so believable in your unbelievable universe. All of their angst is so wonderfully written and described. I especially love all of Sebastian's angst over his illicit crush on the youngin'. I would like to recommend writing some better descriptions of these weird alien things, the descriptions in chapter 15 are so vague... These ...erm... things, are worth describing since...well... we don't have any in our realm of existence. Oh. and fillers aren't a problem...They may seem like it... but... nope, they pretty much keep the story from turning into one giant mess of hands, tongues and TEH SEXXORZ! Looking forward to an update~ ~JLRivera~ |
| aripie 2008-08-21 ch 17, | abuseI neer thought I'd a enjoy so much that was sci-fi related for slash at least lol...cant wait to read more! |
| JtheChosen1 2008-08-15 ch 16, | abusethis.. is... AMAZING!1 couldn't stop reading it, so keep up the gr8 work! |
| Lux Veritas 2008-08-14 ch 17, | abuseI am in love with this story...and Rogue...I want Rogue XP And more updates. Pwease? -Tebbie |
| HisMistress 2008-08-08 ch 17, | abusethis shit should be published fucking hell at points i was bawling my effing eyes out, brilliant work mate. |
| HisMistress 2008-08-07 ch 6, | abuseumm i forgot to ask what the whole hip thing sebastien has? |
| HisMistress 2008-08-07 ch 3, | abuseumm at some point you said, maybe it WAS (italic) ashton, he always had a thing to play the bad guy.. or err something along those lines. i though ashton was supposed to be king guy that has a name coming from the play romeo & juliet? so maybe you should change that :) |
| falingdream 2008-08-04 ch 17, anon. | abuseomg, can you please update this like...NOW!? |
| chazzybiatch 2008-08-03 ch 17, | abuseThis story is certainly intriguing and interesting, please update! Why did Jet have to die? |
| merrymowmow 2008-07-29 ch 17, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Potatoe1988 2008-07-18 ch 17, | abuseOoh! I'm loving this so far. I'm wondering what's up with Sebastian's hip, and what exactly Rogue's reason for fighting is. Much intrigue. My favourite characters are Rogue and Jackson, though maybe I'm just a sucker for the ones with the special abilities. It kinda gives them awesome points, y'know? |
| QueenCasey 2008-07-11 ch 17, | abuseOh my gosh!You totally need to update!Seriously! Yeah...sorry *cough*. Got a little excited there. But seriously this story is just so good! I spent hours looking for it. So update! Please! |
| ninja-master-of-the-moon 2008-07-08 ch 17, | abusegahh this story is amazing! i love it ^_^ and i wish you would update soon...please |
| kalista 2008-07-02 ch 17, anon. | abuseOMG SO FANTASTIC! Rogue x Shaun forever! They are so cute together~ KYA I AM SO UR FAN NOW! |
| kalista 2008-07-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW I LIKE IT! MAN it has been awhile since I finally found something interesting to read! THANK YOU! ok next~ |