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| anacharlie - lazy to login 2007-03-31 ch 11, anon. | abuseIt was predictable, cute and fluffy, just like I needed today. =) |
| crampot 2007-02-08 ch 11,  | abusehahahaha.. i really love it... |
| Writing4Eternity 2007-01-25 ch 11, | abuseAwesome! |
| Hydie 2007-01-23 ch 11, | abuse*grin* god ending |
| ellinikolouloudi 2007-01-22 ch 11, | abuseooh, great ending. I really like this story. Despite what you say in your A/N's, I think it's constructed very well. The switching points of view add interest. Well done! |
| hotbabe123 2007-01-22 ch 11, | abusehey that was so awesome i didnt mind the wait ok at first i did but now i see its so awesome so i forgive you for taking forever! |
| Vcheugas 2007-01-22 ch 11, | abuseOMG OMG! IM SO SAD ITS OVER :( theres one thing about vivian thats nothing like me she has good luck with guys LMAO. lol. |
| BoredomKills0620 2007-01-19 ch 10, | abuseI'm sorry for not reviewing, I suck!*Cries*Actually,no I don't.*Points*It's all my computer's problem of sucking. I have JUST checked my e-mail for the first time since...I dunno, September?...October? XD Cuz with dial-up...Bo.*Thumbs down*So now I have cable 'net!^.^ Anyways,the e-mails were neato. Yay for review replies! All the stuff in common is cool too.*High five*But thank you so much for finishing the story. I remember going "YEAH, UPDATE!*Click*" and then you were all...with the no story end. So THANK YOU! It's like Christmas. Except better cuz mine sucked XD You kept saying these chapters suck, but I'm still liking them a great deal so *Shrug*Good job. Stomach's still doing the flippity-flop,so that's a good sign that they definitely do not suck :) Wo,next one is last.Is this the one where it states the secret?XD (*Does the Running Man cuz she SO guessed right and should be on CSI*) Pretty much.So see ya next chapter, doll!^.^ God bless, Chelsea =^.^= PS-I'll keeping a look-out for anything else you write in the future :) *Checks the box next to the "Favorite Authors" thingy* |
| Hydie 2007-01-19 ch 10, | abuseagain, good chapter. :) |
| Vcheugas 2007-01-17 ch 10, | abuseAWESOME! you rock chels! aww vivian and will so cute! colin should just smack sum sense into this chick grr! lol jk. and ben lol. wow idk but he reminds me of sumone. gr. i cant put my finger on it. lol |
| Hydie 2007-01-15 ch 9, | abuseIf it's any consolation, I don't think the chapters are terrible. The plot is interesting. And...you can always go back and rework it if you need too. :) |
| Vcheugas 2007-01-15 ch 9, | abuseYAY ! VIVIAN GETS HER OWN LOVER LOL. :) poor colin. :( and damn greg walked in at the worst moment. grr. lol this story is so addicting. lol. |
| ellinikolouloudi 2007-01-15 ch 9, | abusewow, I really, really like this story. can't wait to see how it ends. I like the switching points of view, as well. ^__^ |
| karencita26 2007-01-15 ch 9, anon. | abusei like your story!! please post the next chapter quick! |
| Vcheugas 2007-01-07 ch 8, | abuseGar chelsea. lol. i got all excited lol. oh well im enjoying the other story :) |