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Skalpro 2008-07-12 ch 3,	abuseaha!! i thought I sensed a little strain... I am guessing they are going to have a major falling out. hopefully not forever... want my girl to stay well connected.
Skalpro 2008-07-12 ch 2,	abusewow... talk about embarrassing... don't worry I'm not like gonna write on every chapter. Just letting you know that I am enjoying it very much and I'll coment along the way
Skalpro 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abuseOMG I have found a new favorite story! I know this is finished... so it's totally irrelevant. I know however we always like to hear praise... so I'm praising your work. Bien hecho Tatiana. I am totally loving this. It set the mood for someone who was totally avoiding life. You said who she was and why she was the way she was so beautifully. You set it up well because the situation was traumatic but not so traumatic that she can't easily come out of her shell. Freaking awesome!-- S.K.
ess3sandra 2008-06-30 ch 1,	abuselitle boy penises, i like it.
Maeven 2008-06-27 ch 34,	abuseYour writing style is excellent - engaging and funny, your characters really leap off the page. And while it's a romance, the story is also more than that with the powerful relationship between Estela and Moo and the development of all the secondary characters. It felt real. Your style reminds me of Sophie Kinsella, definitely, but in my opinion, I think I like your work much better. Sometimes, her main character annoyed me more than I could tolerate haha and while Estela had her own moments with her own character flaws (which every real being should have anyway), the reader gets close enough to the character to see it turn into more of an endearing quirk. Great job on all your stories and I envy you for your ability to churn out chapters so regularly with such great quality. :) I definitely look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. - Maeven
2008-06-25 ch 6, anon.	abuseI don´t know if you still want to correct your spanish sentences. I am from Spain and I love your work. May be this could help you: -"desplome grande"- I´m not sure what you`re trying to say as you`re talking abot Nascar, smoke and ambulances maybe "gran accidente" - “¡El amperio hora, venido en la máquina del amor… no está enojado!” from what you say in english should be something like "el barco del amor, no te enfades" - “¿Cuándo estos tontos aprenderán?”- "¿Cuándo aprenderan estos tontos?" - "mira tu boca"- "cuidado con lo que dices" I'll try to correct the sentences in the rest of the chapters. Anyway great story.
cue.dramatic.gasp. 2008-05-20 ch 1,	abuseOh My God. Love this story! IT's awesome, dude! (: Question: Is this the same Moo from Hostile Kisses?
MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-04-08 ch 1,	abusecant remember if i added to faves.
violet blossom 2008-04-06 ch 1,	abuseI just found this story and you've already had me from the first chapter. I like your writing style. I can't wait to finish this story and read all your stories.. Your writing style reminds me of Shopie Kinsella.
AJS 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abuseOh. There was one thing I was confused about. Where exactly did Stela work? In the beginning it was all Java-Loo, but then it was Starbucks... but then in the end they had a contract with both Starbucks and Krispy Kreme? So yeah. I'm confused. But I guess it's not really a big point of the story. Anyways, I'm gone! Well, not really gone. More like still here, but onto book 2 :) -- Alyssa
AJS 2008-02-25 ch 34,	abuseOh I love this story, and I regret not reading it sooner. Estala's personality is just too cute. There's something about it. Her narration has this kind of innocent edge to it, that's kind of just in the simplest things such as her always referring to her stomach as Dounut Hole, or calling Moo Moo :) I love that nickname, btw. Best nickname ever :D I've been musing over that all day. Haha. I love Caleb & Estala. But at the same time, I love Adam too. I think I ruined the whole Krispy Kreme thing for myself because I flipped to the end of the reviews to see if it was a happy end (okay... sue me...) and I saw someone say Krispy Kreme... so then from the beginning well I don't know I mean I just somehow knew it was him, lol. But even knowing that, I still want to go back and reread that part in the very beginning. Lol. That's amazing. Hahaha. She's adorable, though. How old is Caleb? Same age? Older? Younger? As an almost 18 year old, 29 sounds kind of ancient. Lol. But I know it's not. Anyways. I'm really excited to move on to the next story of this whole series. I'm sorry this is a really bad review. I usually write better ones. I know there were some parts that you just kind of skimmed over and summarized that I would have liked to see played out. Mainly those were interactions between Caleb & Estela. I wouldn't have been able to even consider forgiving a guy like Dr. Pervo, insane or not. He nearly killed her uncle, tried to kill her, broke into her apartment, stalked her everywhere, planted cams and invaded her privacy, and slashed her boyfriend's freaking tires! I don't think he deserves forgiveness, or mercy, at all. I think though that perhaps his transformation into a sicko was a bit abrupt. It was kind of weird, because at first he seemed like he wasn't really interested in her, but then he was back and all over her. I don't know. I think that maybe it's because his moves escalated really highly really quickly, if that makes much sense. There was just a big jump... but I mean then when I think about it, it kind of makes sense... I don't know. Anyways. Love Estela. Love Moo. Honestly, it makes me look at myself and my own best friend and wonder what's wrong with our friendship. Haha. Even though I love my best friend, we're not nearly as close as Stela & Moo are. Well. I said I was going. I'm going! That was just my attempt to make this review a bit better :x Give some actual feedback other than Stela's personality is adorable and Caleb's personality is perfect for her :) -- Alyssa
longevity101 2008-01-15 ch 34,	abusewow, i loved this story...i read the entire thing in 3 days, no joke, but i actually should have been studying for my midyear exams...o well, hopefully i'll get started on the next one soon!! keep up the GREAT work!! thanks for a great story!
miss-blackhair 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abusehaha, i tink you've done a real good job in this. haha. i like how you play around with words. cool stuff(:
Erisah Mae 2007-10-25 ch 34,	abuseThis is fantastic- the characters are all so wonderfully diverse, the action is beautifully paced, and I absolutely loved the development of Estela and Caleb's relationship... almost as much as I loved the various vibes and energies (god that sounds hippy) that entertwined through the relationships of the various characters. Brilliant. Erisah
TheDJ 2007-09-30 ch 2,	abuseHuzzah! Fictionpress has itself a writer who writes short, sexy, brilliant chapters (albiet, with some spelling errors) for an entire story! I'd buy the book! So gonna read this entire thing - and that's not something I usually do on fictionpress. Great writing mate, congrats on a fantastic story. Just the (normal, probably already identified) advice - grammer needs a bit of work, syntax is a bit out in places. But, most importantly, the story is Brilliant! Congratulations :) --TheDJ

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