Aw, I've heard some really good reviews about this story and would have really enjoyed reading it. Good luck with your publication though, I might get to read it yet!

hi, i never got to finish the story, and i favorited your story (this one, killing memories) so i would get back to it someday
i kind of regret it because from what i remember i really liked the main character a whole lot because she seemed so nice and cute. her family was also wonderful sounding and her mom (i think it was ... i can't remember very well) sounded very rounded out and tyrannical. i felt her frustration and anger and stuff. this is like all i can remember but i wish you best on publication :)

Haha, i am so glad that you didn't take down the story yet!
It would've been such a shame to miss out!
I love that you didn't use a perfect, beautiful main character. It makes the story more realistic and something people can relate to because everyone has flaws
I love them together, they are just so cute!!
I was crying when Tio got shot! It was s scary, thank god he survived.
All in all, thank you so much for such a great story!
I hope that you will succeed in publishing your story and that it will sell well. People will be missing out if they don't read this story!

Your story is better than pink jelly beans.
I'm in love.

Reading the summary = HAHAHAHA = reading the first chapter = loving the story already.
It's awesome in a fighting-the-giggles which in fact makes it all the more entertaining.
The thing I love most is the way you managed to give the characters such a vivid personality in just...a thousand something words =]

Well sad as I am that this story will be taken down as its one of my favorites, and I have read it a few times, I sincerely hope that you get published! Good luck

-Phelps 112

"Things with penises scare me."

this made me laugh. :D as in. laughing on the floor. can't get over it.

can't get enough,.

-threm. keep up the good work.

I just have to say that I absolutely love your stories and that I hope that everything works out well. These really were some of my favorite stories on this site!

Hey congrats,...now Im just going to have to rush and reread them all before you take them, down...
:D
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Congratulations about looking for lit. agents and publishers. Your favorite story of mine is this one - it so beautiful and crazy and I love it. I also LOVED/absolutely adored your short story about Bunny and Alex in the 1800s. It was absolutely adorable.

I'll be sad to see your work taken down because its always such a constant to me (just like Queen of Glass by S.J. Maas; that also got taken for publishing, er, tries).

Good luck and wishing you all the best! Happy New Year and a belated holiday!

Love,
BringMayFlowers



P.S. do you still review back? if not, that is completely understandable. Again, best of luck!

I noticed a few mistakes lately.
Like heals instead of heels... and there was another one but I forgot it.
But the plot is fine.

Jeez, your story is incredible...
It might sound funny, but it took me a while to connect this story with Daisy's which is pretty dumb of me because there is an obviously HUGE amount of things that I could endlessly list here, but I'll spear you the pain...

Being personally a big girl who has had her share of deceptions and insecurities, I love this story, I felt identified, not just a girl, but as a women, and well I loved the giddy feeling reading this made me feel... It made me feel hope, and normal and so many different things...

I love the fact that this smile Im wearing, all because of KM by the way, is not fading...

Me encantan your stories... They are trully something...

MaGa!

I like the developmentof the story, but I got a little sugestion. We, spanish spokers, use Titi en vez de tia, when refering to the person. For example, Come on, titi! It's more informal and it expresses familiarity. It's the same with mama. Normally, when talking abouth our Mother, we use mama o madre, but mom is mami.

WOW! I think I'm in love with Caleb.

I love this story so muc!! Estela is hilarious.