I like how the first two sentences set a mood. Not many amateur stories do. Good job on that. The punctuation could need more work.
"blue eyed blond angel" was offsetting, because it's such a cliché in an otherwise original piece, while "dancing dark eyes" works very well; I haven't heard it before, and it also tells me something (I interpret it as shifty?. Very creative piece! Well, I can say that many fantasize about such a thing, but the scene is very clear and vividly described. I'm not too fond of the ending, it's like those waking up from a nightmare scenes, or poorly written poetry. I also feel that the story would benefit from more things not being written so clearly, because it would make the reader feel it more.

Good job!

Oh wow... that was really intense. In a good way of course.

xoxo H.E.S.

that was hot. i want to know how to write such deep short stories like you do but not in the same mannor you know.