Reviews for Where is the road to redemption?

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kiki 2008-02-10 ch 7, anon.	abuseplease update!
Sheepie 2007-09-17 ch 7,	abuseI like this story, it was rather sad in the beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!
Onion Ring 2007-03-20 ch 7,	abuseI like how it is written and there are few grammar or spelling problems, if any. The dialogue is good, as the characters have some sort of slang... The only slight problem I have is that these first few chapters all seem to be a prologue. After the first chapter, the other 5 only speak about how Daniel wants to be forgiven while Jeff is recovering. It does not have much development except for Jeff's physical recovery and slightly clearing the mystery of who did this to him, but after these seven chapters, I (the reader) has yet to learn that much about the main characters. The last few lines though, it seems Daniel has slightly fallen for Jeff? It's quite cliche, but I suppose thinking of how he could have lost his best friend could have triggered that emotion, which is realistic... but from the beginning, Daniel has yet to admit hes gay... and now he is suggesting he is in love? That is what sort of bewilders me. It's still very good though... Continue!
merrymowmow 2007-03-12 ch 7,	abuseI was wondering when you're going to update?
FoR rEaSoNs UnKnOwN 2007-01-14 ch 7,	abuseomg love this chapter! Love this story. update soon!
princess max 2007-01-14 ch 7, anon.	abuseYou updated! I'm glad Jeff is recovering, but I feel for him. I can understand why he'd be so frustrated, and I'm kinda worrying now that he'll get angry at the attention he's receiving. I hope he copes OK.
SilverYami 2007-01-13 ch 7,	abuseThis is really cute! I like it alot, but I hope that Danny and Jeff will get together! But with problems? With the way Danny reacted when Jeff told him he was gay, I cant see him taking to liking Jeff very well. But it is them that is the pairing, right? Hope so! Now I am all excited! Please write more soon!
CaFFy 2007-01-13 ch 7,	abuseWill he ever draw again? =[ Update soon.
Sakru angelqueen 2007-01-13 ch 7,	abuseGood chapter! I'm glad everything is going better for those two!
Kizuna 2007-01-13 ch 7,	abuseGrat update!^__^ I'm glad he learned to walk again, and that he got those glasses...^_^ Feel so sorry for him for the drawing-part, though... That must really suck...
sporkess 2007-01-13 ch 7,	abuseMe being the shocking person I am, I have reviewed you maybe twice, ever, in spite of the fact that I fairly consistently adore and worship all your stories. My new year's resolution was to actually start reviewing things, so here I am with an apology for my lazy ways. Delightful! It's a very cute story. I find it hard to get to grips with it, because it's written first person from someone who is not remotely like me, but even then I can appreciate the cuteness (although I must admit that I find it hard not to laugh at their accents - I'm English, so all American accents are just hilarious.) I really have no idea how you're going to pull a happy ending out of this muddle. It looks as if Danny and Jeff are going to end up together - but part of me keeps hoping for a mysterious stranger to enter the story and be Jeff's whirlwind romance. Anyway, I always find it hard to know what to say when you probably have loads of people reviewing already, but I bequeathe you with a great gift of love for all your stories, and I hope you update soon!
kanjil 2007-01-13 ch 7, anon.	abuseThe different and drastic changes in Jeff's life are very convincingly depicted. Danny's bad conscience, although understandable, complicates their friendship hopefully not too much. Very well written. I can't wait to read how things will develop.
failte200 2006-12-01 ch 6,	abuseAre we all supposed to feel safe from the gang now? I don't. That part about how they'd been WATCHING Jeff kinda creeped me out... I can forsee at least the ring-leader being rather blood-thirsty by the time he gets out, and who actually does the time they're sentenced for? So I sorta actually hope you DON'T revisit that aspect... but I feel in my bones that you will. Okay, anyway, you handled the bad guys, Jeff's gonna be kind of okay, with difficulty, and Our Sorrowful Hero will be there to help him through it all. Actually, I'm kinda hoping the narrator stay's straight, and just becomes Jeff's Best Friend Again - perhaps even introducing Jeff to the Right Guy. But then, having the narrator turn is always just wickedly fun, isn't it... :)
CaFFy 2006-11-26 ch 6,	abuseAw... =[ Poor Jeff. HAVE A MIRACLE!! HEAL RIGHT!!
Storm December 2006-11-25 ch 6,	abuseThat's so sad! Poor Jeff has to learn to write and DRAW again! (Cries!) I feel his pain. (Sniff. Sniff.) At least the boys who hurt him got what they deserved. Hopefully Troy and John will end up being the b**chs of someone named Bruno or something! (Hehe!) They'll hate that one! I love the story! Keep up the great work! Storm TTFN! ;)

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