>8( Why do I see no update since '07?!

Anyways, I really like this story, and you 'feel' for the characters! I feel bad for Jeff that he lost the ability to draw, but hopefully he can draw like he used to in the future!

Much love
~Stangy

I especially like how the story is written. It's as if I can hear the protagonist saying things the way you write them. I am disappointed that you seem to have abandoned this story but it was still quite refreshing to read this as the prose is quite different from anything that I've read. I hope you will change your mind, or perhaps find your inspiration again for this story

awesome story! very different from what you have written before, but its still awesome! keep up the great work!

please update!

I like this story, it was rather sad in the beginning. Can't wait to see where this goes. Update soon!

I like how it is written and there are few grammar or spelling problems, if any. The dialogue is good, as the characters have some sort of slang... The only slight problem I have is that these first few chapters all seem to be a prologue. After the first chapter, the other 5 only speak about how Daniel wants to be forgiven while Jeff is recovering. It does not have much development except for Jeff's physical recovery and slightly clearing the mystery of who did this to him, but after these seven chapters, I (the reader) has yet to learn that much about the main characters. The last few lines though, it seems Daniel has slightly fallen for Jeff? It's quite cliche, but I suppose thinking of how he could have lost his best friend could have triggered that emotion, which is realistic... but from the beginning, Daniel has yet to admit hes gay... and now he is suggesting he is in love? That is what sort of bewilders me. It's still very good though... Continue!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

omg love this chapter! Love this story. update soon!

You updated! I'm glad Jeff is recovering, but I feel for him. I can understand why he'd be so frustrated, and I'm kinda worrying now that he'll get angry at the attention he's receiving. I hope he copes OK.

This is really cute! I like it alot, but I hope that Danny and Jeff will get together! But with problems? With the way Danny reacted when Jeff told him he was gay, I cant see him taking to liking Jeff very well. But it is them that is the pairing, right? Hope so! Now I am all excited! Please write more soon!

Will he ever draw again? =[ Update soon.

Good chapter! I'm glad everything is going better for those two!

Grat update!^__^ I'm glad he learned to walk again, and that he got those glasses...^_^ Feel so sorry for him for the drawing-part, though... That must really suck...

Me being the shocking person I am, I have reviewed you maybe twice, ever, in spite of the fact that I fairly consistently adore and worship all your stories. My new year's resolution was to actually start reviewing things, so here I am with an apology for my lazy ways.

Delightful! It's a very cute story. I find it hard to get to grips with it, because it's written first person from someone who is not remotely like me, but even then I can appreciate the cuteness (although I must admit that I find it hard not to laugh at their accents - I'm English, so all American accents are just hilarious.)

I really have no idea how you're going to pull a happy ending out of this muddle. It looks as if Danny and Jeff are going to end up together - but part of me keeps hoping for a mysterious stranger to enter the story and be Jeff's whirlwind romance.

Anyway, I always find it hard to know what to say when you probably have loads of people reviewing already, but I bequeathe you with a great gift of love for all your stories, and I hope you update soon!

The different and drastic changes in Jeff's life are very convincingly depicted. Danny's bad conscience, although understandable, complicates their friendship hopefully not too much. Very well written. I can't wait to read how things will develop.