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| xx-cronopio-xx 2007-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis. Is. Incredible. The ending rhyme in the last two lines is seductively clever. I am feebly positing that this is a poem concerning the victim of a car wreck? If not, then *cringe* I'm sorry. It is the sort of poem, I think, that can be interpreted through several different layers of inflections and connotations. The end left me breathless. Why haven't u written more? :( I miss your writing ... Adieu, Kat (formerly Virtual Unicorn) |