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| Laceyx3 2007-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseFave! |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuse"counting down the days in fading lipstick"...that's awesome...the end about something on home was also kind of weird and not that related but its bit of incohesiveness with the poem makes a quite impact...which is good...you did a good job... truly yours... |
| Dice Darwin 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI have no clue what this meant, but I still liked it quite a bit. Great imagery. Very nice. |
| sarah1491 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abuseNicely written. I like the use of parenthesis. Very good. :) Keep writing. -Sarah |
| Krye 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love how you chose those metaphoric words in place of ordinary words. Very imaginative poem. Fantastic! |
| wishing/dreaming/waiting 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuselove it! I love your imagery and your word choice and your analogies and the fact that it's a returning love and not just love. great work!! |