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| Travis C. Eckert 2006-10-04 ch 1,   | Fairly good I think. |
| felicia13 2006-10-04 ch 1, | Nicely written. It lacks the repition of your others, but it's a nice change of pace ... Are you a romantic? You seem to write a lot of love poems ... "If indeed that shallow feeling/Were love and not just a meeting of the eye/Giving me a smile" Beautiful way to end it. Felicia. |