I like the poem, but 2 quick things:
- last line has the word "she" twice
- Is that really how you spell "moustash"? I always thought it was "moustache." I don't know.
Also, in the eighth line, for some reason your choice of the word "Those" surprised me, especially when followed by "the" face paint. It just amde me stop for a second, thinking, whiich tattoos? Maybe that's how you want it, tho.

Awesome! I like dances... and temporary tattoos! I had one of Spongebob on my ankle for awhile... Anywho, I like the "laugh, joke, hang/dance" repetitions. Makes it very unique and fun to read. Nice job!

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That's cute. I like it. Now if only I could figure out who that girl is...:)