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| Anne Onymus 2008-01-26 ch 6,  | abuseHooray for new chapters :) Poor Dice, he's so distressed. IT's odd that he comments at the end of the chapter that his mother would be angry if he came home because earlier on it mentions how close he is to his mother, how she wants him to be happy and how she was worrying about him. i'm interested to see what develops. As ever, I look forward to reading future chapters; keep up the good work :) |
| Anne Onymus 2008-01-15 ch 5, | abuseOh poor Dice he's so stressed and confused. Jasper doens't deserve that treatment. When will Dice realize that Jasper is the boy from his past and that they're still perfect for each other? |
| Anne Onymus 2007-12-09 ch 4, | abuseI love this story, I'm glad that you finally updated :) Poor Dice, it's so sad :( But I know he'll find that mysterious guy from his past (nods) and odds are its Jasper, its only a matter of time until Dice realizes that. Keep it tup; I love this story. -Anne |
| Ms. Socks 2006-11-25 ch 3, | abuseOh, my God. You actually used the title. XD That's fantastic. Does Dinosaur know you did that? |
| Anne Onymus 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abuseNo worries, it sounds fine. I really really like this story, it's so heartfelt. I wish that Dice would wake up and realized that Jasper is his "other" though, it's so obvious! But I suppose you have work up to the climax, am I right? Drag it out until it's perfect? Well; you're good at that |
| bellevampire89 2006-10-24 ch 2, | abuseyes! more to this story! I'm really intrigued now (although u've already told me the twist and everything). I love it! Keep going (through all the school work...and try to get a little done on August, too?~*pweze*~) :) |
| Anne Onymus 2006-10-24 ch 2, | abuseOh, Dice is a grumpy one. I like the short chapters in this so far; short and sweet :). Please post again soon, you havent't posted anything (before this) in AGES and I miss your witting style. I love your love stories; keep up the good work! --Love; Annie |
| Anne Onymus 2006-10-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, strangly similar in a sence to my life (/ dreams). I had (have?) a total crush on a guy I haven't seen in years, we were never a couple, we were too young for that anyways, yet he still haunts my mind. I'm just hoping/dreaming that I'll meat p with him someday. He had red hair too... Oh well, I'll keep on dreaming and you'd better keep posting.--All my love;Annie O. |