Hi, I just felt like I had to review this. It's a fantastic idea and I really hope you find the time to continue this soon.

That being said I do have some points to pick. Firstly, the pacing. I can't pinpoint what it is but this feels too rushed on the whole. Maybe you should spend more time on descriptions, that sort of thing to break up the story. At the moment it jumps from action to action and moves way to quickly.

There's also some believability issues. Like the train gets blown up and everyone just goes 'It must be the end of the world,' whereas these days people would jump to the conclusion that it was a terrorist attack or just an accident. And they all just accept that they have supernatural powers without any skepticism. And I imagine people with those sorts of powers would be very secretive about their abilities.

As to the number of characters, i think it's fine. The problem people are probably having is imagining them and their characters because their only point of reference is straight after the train crash and that was only a short physical description of each of them. I'm actually getting Michael quite strongly because you show his character in his actions.

I have a lot more to say on this but i'll leavce it for now so i don't flood your reviews. Would really like to see where this is going. And for the record my favourite characters are Jo and Michael at the moment.

this was a good two chapters but i wonder what happened to Brennan? maybe Natalie took him away? hmm...well update again soon!

Haha, favorite character after this chapter would deffinetly be Michael. Him Brennan and Nadia remind me of Sawyor, Jack, and Kate from LOST. I really liked this chapter so much, and I hope that you countinue real soon cause this story is my new addiction. Also as for predictions, I think that Natalie's group will probably take Luca or Gabriel next, seeing as Xander is on the injured list they will probably leave him and Jo. I like the connections between Cole Jo, and Michael Nadia.

Great job! This is shaping into an awsome story, I am really starting to fall for you characters too which is great. Luca, Cole, and Jo are so interesting, Xander and Brennan are also great.

I like this story and hope you go on with it. I am also interested in Cole, could you possibly give more on his gift? Great job I look forward to seeing this go on.

wow so Nadi's parents are alive? wow i wonder why they left her to live in a new home then...well i can't wait for the rest of the story so please update soon!

wow this story is so interesting so far! i found your story while looking for something new to read and am already hooked on this! i myself have a story about people with abilities and maybe you can read it sometime? that is if it's not too much to ask of you...

Hmm.. this chapter's pretty short! Anyway, one thing about this story (maybe I had told you before) is that it has way too many characters. I'm getting confused whenever I read this story. Usually when I read, an image of the character the writer painted in my mind would appear. But it doesn't happen here. Maybe you should kill off some of the less important characters and introduce less people into this story! Other than that, this chapter's pretty pleasant! :P

good chapters...

i luved your story! keep writing! get published!!

Hey.. I like these two new chapters! They are nice!! Anyway.. well done!!

ok dailey - you've stated showing more of why. my question - when and how did they realise their poweres and more importantly are they the only people (who existed in this reality) with superpowers. Third what is the conflict?

hm...the action is moving a little slow, but otherwise another good chapter.

Nice, a new chapter
It's really good

An astronomer.. hm.. what can he do? Anyway.. this is a cool chapter!!