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Reviews For: The Future
The Winking Peach Candle 2008-01-29 . chapter 1
wow, that was a scary one, really intense!

kudos

~YourRedDoor
S. R. Devaste 2007-08-08 . chapter 1
an uninteresting idea, i love the spacing, but the wording not so much.
Chaos Apple 2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Wonderful. Fast paced and intense-I loved this.

Excellent job.

♥ Alice
My Tears Don't Fall 2006-10-04 . chapter 1
A good symbolistic way of expressing your pessimism towards the future. Good job saying so much in so little.

~stlouisrams00
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