I'm in a latin class, and we translate alot of poetry. Before I did this I was never into such works, yet when you take apart a peice of writing like you have to do for translation...well you understand in a completely differant way. I still have trouble doing that with english poems, but your poetry slides so easily into my mind.

wow...creepy...

I really like the way this was written, it seems to have an easy flow to it. The first line really sticks to me, the first four lines actually. I enjoyed this. Keep writing! :)