Ok, living with the love of your life totally rocks. Not having to say goodbye every night, not having to watch them leave you.

-Christine

it's frustrating how life hands you those little moments where you don't quite feel like you belong. I think a lot of people can relate to this, nice job. :) *L

Format is beautiful.. and the meaning is so powerful..

LOVE it!

Firstly, I love the format here. Such a small thing, breaking up the haiku to place the heart in between the second and third lines, but it had such an effect. Almost like a breath or a sigh. The words are very well place and I got a true snese of saddness from this haiku. I relate to this haiku.

Peace, Daze

Aw such a nice haiku. I love the last line especially.

O.O...somehow bitter...

nice...

nice, i like haiku's coz they're short and to the point and you did that right. i like the message too.