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| ... 2007-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this line//I’m from the future, buddy. 2006. ‘The Gods’ don’t even get a full shelf in the bookstore. Harry Potter…and…unfortunately, George Bush, are the ‘Gods’ where I come from.// |
| Krystal Watters 2007-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseawesome ^^. I like this girl I like how she fights. At the begining she is slightly crazy, describing her situation and all, but it helps the reader know her personality. Achilles seems kind of a flat character, but that's excuseable since the main focus is the girl. is her name really Bird? odd-ish kind of name kept me on edge the whole time ^^ |
| cheesecake.thief 2007-04-21 ch 1, | abuseWhy are all the best work always one-shots? This is better than most of the stories I've read this week -.- |
| pink skyy 2006-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseomigoodness, ur just darling you know that? I love these kind of stories, and even better, its greek myth. How awsome is that? But it looks like you haven't update in like two friggin months man. Waz up with that? I wouldn't want to hunt you down like the genius master mind of greek kick ** stories now wuold I? Lets update soon and let everyone be happy keh? see ya sweetie. from your new friend Mia |
| The Ferrett 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseOk havent read yet but the blurb works and i do generally like these kinds of stories. Will submit proper review when read. Will chat too. |
| glossy seraphyme 2006-10-18 ch 1, | abusethe plot is fantastic, but it would have been better if you written it better, and expounded on the plot more. achilles' interrogation of the girl was way too long, in my opinion. :)anyways, a nice read, but could have been beter. :D |
| VexiVicious 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abusereally fantastic.. I'd love for it to be continued but it is nice the way it is and i love the characters! |