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| angelbymistake 2006-11-26 ch 1,   | eww. hehe. weird trot. weird. but cool. |
| shadowcat86 2006-11-10 ch 1, | okay, that was... interesting! |
| Winter Snowflake 2006-11-07 ch 1, | heh, that was pretty funny! And well written as well! |
| guess who's back babies 2006-11-05 ch 1, | pfft rice is obviously life and see i JUST got your e-mail and i'm reviewing for you ^^ returning favors is nice *hint hint nudge nudge* |
| q is for quirks 2006-11-05 ch 1, | "Tell everyone that... Rice is life!" That just made me laugh out loud. That was great. I love how the loss of rice will eventually lead to death, and how everybody was freaking out about it. That was funny. Great story. |
| Miss Pookamonga 2006-11-02 ch 1, | XDXDXDXDXD HA! THAT WAS HILARIOUS! Being Asian, I know how much I cannot live w/out rice...and I totally understood the point of this story. Rice IS life! Luv: Morgandy aka Pooka ;-P |
| Amei666 2006-10-31 ch 1, | Hah, that's pretty good. I mean it. And I didn't know how many people actually like rice... |
| mad about books 2006-10-31 ch 1, | Hee..hee.. so true, I'll go nuts if I don't eat rice for two days.. Anyhoo, I liked the flow of the story and that it was definitely entertaining.. But I'd like to see you add even more humor! |
| Mr.Satire 2006-10-29 ch 1, | Very entertaining! You sequenced it quite well, and I liked the ending! |
| B.S. Ha 2006-10-29 ch 1, | haha! this is great- and so true! P.S. i got an invitation to be part of the C2 community, but i'm not quite familiar with C2s... |
| whiteroses12 2006-10-29 ch 1, | It's so random it's hilarious!*laughs* Funny,very funny |
| Endangered Thinker 2006-10-29 ch 1, | Very entertaining story. But lay off the cough syrup, too much can make you hallucinate. |
| Baseball2horse 2006-10-06 ch 1, | That's actually pretty funny. |