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burning in effigy
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abuseokay. kind of creepy but i guess it reminds me of some of my earlier poems

i like the use of the phrase "scarlet vines" because you're not openly stating "blood" which is really blunt. and i'm all for subtlety.

"and experiment/excites/a routine." - fantastic stanza and the ending of the poem is haunting but it fits so well
losing gracie girl
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseso sad.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost
Lady Fingers
2007-12-30
ch 1,
abusewhy are you so good?
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