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burning in effigy 2008-06-18 . chapter 1
okay. kind of creepy but i guess it reminds me of some of my earlier poems

i like the use of the phrase "scarlet vines" because you're not openly stating "blood" which is really blunt. and i'm all for subtlety.

"and experiment/excites/a routine." - fantastic stanza and the ending of the poem is haunting but it fits so well
your taste of stardust 2008-03-04 . chapter 1
so sad.

yours until the wind changes,
Lost
Lady Fingers 2007-12-30 . chapter 1
why are you so good?
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