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| burning in effigy 2008-06-18 ch 1, | abuseokay. kind of creepy but i guess it reminds me of some of my earlier poems i like the use of the phrase "scarlet vines" because you're not openly stating "blood" which is really blunt. and i'm all for subtlety. "and experiment/excites/a routine." - fantastic stanza and the ending of the poem is haunting but it fits so well |
| losing gracie girl 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseso sad. yours until the wind changes, Lost |
| Lady Fingers 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abusewhy are you so good? |