 burning in effigy 2008-06-18 . chapter 1okay. kind of creepy but i guess it reminds me of some of my earlier poems
i like the use of the phrase "scarlet vines" because you're not openly stating "blood" which is really blunt. and i'm all for subtlety.
"and experiment/excites/a routine." - fantastic stanza and the ending of the poem is haunting but it fits so well |