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| Junki 2006-12-16 ch 50,  | abuseThe friendship one, is my favorite out of all of them. Really tightens my soul, becally reminds me of my best friend and mine friendship! |
| Niki Tori 2006-11-09 ch 19, | abuse*SNAPS* Another great poem!! I have never herd of Lil Corey before. He must be good...right? Anyways LoVe Ya Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-11-09 ch 18, | abuseWhoa...NICE!! Such description!! *SNAPS* I am moving on now!! LOVE YA Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-11-05 ch 17, | abuseYes...yes you do think up poetry quick. But that's okay because you are good at writting poetry!! Did you know PE was the #1 cause of back pain...Well I can't back that up...but I can relate along with others that Phys Ed can kill you. *SNAPS* ^_^ awesome poem!! I really enjoy your poems!!^_^ UnTil NeXt TimE LoVe Ya Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-11-05 ch 16, | abuse*SNAPS* !!SWEET!! I really liked this poem!! P.E does suck...Luckily I don't have to take it!! But I want to so I don't have to take this summer(sighs) Anyway...Another classic written by the Dramatist!! UntiL NeXt TimE LoVe Ya Niki!! |
| teh tarik 2006-11-04 ch 33, | abuseonce again i love the last line - it just had the most meaning in this whole poem. |
| teh tarik 2006-11-04 ch 26, | abusethe first line just had that impact of the lashing winds. and the last line was a great finish to the whole piece. great work |
| teh tarik 2006-11-04 ch 12, | abusei love the phrase *kissing water* lovely piece. |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-24 ch 15, | abuse*SNAPPY*!! This was a DRAMA-YEAHH!! Hey, isn't it strange how music can totally alter someones mood. I am listing to the radio...Britney Spears just came on...yeah...her. 0_o Your probably wondering why the heck I am listing to it...I dunno...it remides me of my second review..HEHE!! Sorry had a flashback. Anyways...You rock at writting poetry!! I need to learn how to write it...(sighs)I need more Floetry. Until NExT TiME LOVe you!! NikI |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-24 ch 14, | abuseThank you, Floetry AKA Dramtist!! ^_^ Now back to the important stuff!! *SNAPS* This poem, WoW...I know that feeling...-_- (Sighs) Well, I have to say you are great at writting poetry that I can understand. Everything has a wonderful flow to it!! UntIl NeXT TiME LoVe You Niki!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-24 ch 13, | abuse*SNAPS* This was good!! You are so FLOECTIC! I'll try to read more before I go to bed! It's 12:05 pm...I just finished cooking!! UGH I AM TIRED!! ^_^ -_- Z Again, VErY nicE PoEm Until NeXt time!! LOVE YA NIKi!! |
| Niki Tori 2006-10-24 ch 12, | abuse*SNAPS* Another AWESOME poem! This is one of my fav. poems now! I LUV THE RAIN! ^_^ I get the best sleep from rain! Who doesn't! I'll read your other awesome poems after I cook! Until NeXt Time LoVE Ya Niki!! |
| Dice Darwin 2006-10-19 ch 3, | abuseAnother good one. I liked it. |
| Dice Darwin 2006-10-19 ch 2, | abuseThis was great. I really loved the imagery. |
| Dice Darwin 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWeird, but cool. Very original. |