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smile for the sunshine 2007-03-08 ch 1,	abuseYour poetry is incredible. I love all that I've read so far but it is so sad! I'm so sorry that you've been through all you have. I wish there was something I could do for you since I was there at one point in my life. Let me know if I can do anything.
ToppyoushiKoneko 2007-02-27 ch 1,	abuseYou really put it clear and make me feel what you are going through. Me likey
flyinghome 2007-02-18 ch 1,	abuseI think that everyone can relate to this poem. I constantly find myself putting on a happy face when deep down I'm really not ok. It flows very nicely, but I thought that the last few lines didn't flow as well. I did really like the wording of the lines, but they didn't have the same flow as the rest of it. Overall, really great job :)
hateandkill-D 2006-10-10 ch 1,	abuseI love this! It's like exactly how I go through everyday with my friends at school, laughing a little and pretending around them that's everything's fine, when really I just want it to end... Great job! This is really good! Keep it up and never quit!
sarah1491 2006-10-08 ch 1,	abuseI love the use of bold, but it ca get a bit confusing to read. Anyways, nice job. :) -Sarah
2006-10-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow, painful.
PocoSnow15 2006-10-05 ch 1,	abuseWow! Awesome! Same here. I can put on the most fake smile where everyone thinks I'm okay. Fabulous job!