okay um oops. I totally didn't mean to hit submit right then. Right, so as I was trying to say I liked the first one a lot. The subject was well portrayed and I agree with the end conclusion. Conformity is definitely tough competition when it comes to not losing a friend to it.

I liked the repetition of some of the ideas throughout the poem and the fact that it was free verse while dealing with conformity was good subliminal hint (intentionally or not..it still adds strength to the meaning)

well done on all of them though, I just chose to comment on that one.
Wolf's Night

very cool. You have such a nice variation to your poetry. The last one definitely was lighthearted and a good end note for the collection though I must say the first is my favorite.
There doesn't seem to be much uniform structure, its more free verse which is why I think it works so well.

Yes, you are definitely morbid! :(

What the deuce? Is this morbid? Haha, what is this thing the writer refers to?

Also interesting...but, lacking something to be really good. Idk what, though...not every poem has to be a masterpiece, no?

Hmm...interesting, perhaps more so to me than the average person as I am a musician ;)

So, I read your review on...grr...can't remember the author's sn, but 'The Ten Proposals'...anyway, I was like, who is this uber-cynical person? Haha, as I am also cynical I thought I should comment on some of your stuff, keep in touch when I need an honest opinion ;).

Well, this poem is...ventish. Haha, that's about all there is to this one. Not all that poetic, but venting stuff is good at times ;)

xD I loved the limerick. I also love the way your words flow together, as if they can rhyme without technically rhyming. It makes me feel all inspired to write poetry, even though I'm not even a poetry person. Brilliance, I say!

Anyhoodles, why yes, I am doing the HarperTeen fan whatever too! I'm so glad to know that someone familiar is doing it as well. :) Tell me the name of your chapter and I'll totally 5 it, just because we have connections like that. Mine are called "One Week" and "I Knew Dave Would Always Be There For Me--Even If I Had To Drag Him."

Bwahaha! Keep up your poetry! I shall be reading...

-Sally