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| JEFFREY LOURIE 2008-06-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow do you publish a wedding? There is not much originality here, and there is no need for it. It is about the most interesting story that has ever occurred, and it has occurred billions of times and will continue to do so. The use of so many phrases that are known to us all does not make them trite, the repetitions work to affirm that the story has happened once again. It not only unites the couple, it unites the couple to the rest of humanity. There is only one clinker in the poem - "LIKE". It works to separate your generation from mine. |