 Patricia Louise 2006-11-16 . chapter 1Interesting format. I love this! |
 ADSpencer 2006-10-31 . chapter 1Oh, I love this poem. I recall reading it when you first but it up, but I suppose I didn't ever get around to reviewing. Anyhow, great work! Dramatic line cut-offs. |
 bread and circuses 2006-10-05 . chapter 1Wow. That is really different - to what I was expecting, and to most other poems.
[Create your won reality]- You probably meant 'own'.
[allow chaos it’s/ Control] - Do you mean the control that chaos posesses? Because that would be 'its'. This means 'allow chaos it is control'.
I love the simplicity of the formatting. It makes the words that much more powerful. Great poem! |
 Frogalog 2006-10-05 . chapter 1wow. really nice. really unique. i liked the simplicity. it made it pretty in a strange way. good job. |
 autumnmurder 2006-10-05 . chapter 1Well done! I like the way you wrote this. :) |