Reviews for What Happened to Daddy?

crazystar0 2007-06-08 ch 1,	abuseaw so sad!!
a 2007-04-21 ch 1, anon.	abusei like it! it's so pure, and full of the innocence a child has...
ming yee 2006-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abusehey.. once again.. gud job..
polka dots and addictions 2006-10-10 ch 1,	abusethis is bittersweet & sad. you've portrayed the little childs innocence & naivety beautifully. I f i were you though,i would either do the 4 stanza thing or unstructured stanzas, but its always a bit dangerous mixing the two. lovely work though. ~Bex xx
reach4thesky 2006-10-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, I like that. It's really sad!! I do agree with the stanza thing. I like to do 4 lines per stanza, but that's just me. I think it's interesting in this poem, the rhyme scheme (ever 2nd and 4th line, right?)gives the poem a sort of ironic, jaunty feel compared to the story.good work!
Ivy Orion 2006-10-06 ch 1,	abuseI wasn't laughing when I got finished! Almost want to cry actually...FIRST: Sad story. Really good sad story. Make sense? I liked it, it was just sad.SECOND: I don't know if this is just me, but I think maybe you should use a more definite pattern when putting your poems together. You know like setting up stanzas or something? I know what I mean but I'm not making sense I think... anyway email if you have questions.