Poor Ben! I think he needs to confide in someone ASAP!

I'm guessing you got a beta, but in case you still need one, I'd love to be it.

BETA BETA BETA.

Just so you notice it, maybe.

Very excited to read about Val learning Ben's secret.

Also, sorry for sending your inbox a torrent of review alerts. I'll stop after this one until the latest chapter...

I've seen the kiwi video many times. Indeed it is SO SAD I seriously may have cried (I was probably on the verge of tears) the first time I watched it. But I love it.

And.

HAHAHA the Inigo Montoya thing was so great! I was really proud of myself for actually getting what Romeo meant by the six fingers before the quote itself, and it's been a while since I've seen Princess Bride. Very good :)

I love this. IloveitIloveitIloveit.

It's cool that you tell us what stuff is actually based off things you've encountered. I've heard (and have come to know) that most writers reveal a lot of themselves in their writing without realizing it or admitting it. So it's cool that you're mentioning it right off the bat.

Yayamazingstory.

Laguna finally sees what he's going through. Maybe they'll start to work on pulling him out. I feel like what he is hearing is real, but he needs to learn how not to hear everything all the time. I don't even remember how long I've been following your story... please update again sometime!

I've also recently read Charms and Curses and loved it (I think I reviewed...). I'd love an update to that too!

That was hysterical. I was laughing or smiling the entire time.

I love this. This is amazing. It's so creative and quirky and interesting, and I've only read the first chapter. I am jazzed, JAZZED to read more.

...Jazzed, I say.

First, let me say that I started this story today and have been adoring it every second.

I LOVE all your characters and the three boys' names are so unique, which I really love. I think the only character I don't really care about is Laguna...odd.

My favorite character is, of course, Benvolio. I can actually relate to his character, the fact that we both hide things from our family, to reassure and make them not worry about us. Though his circumstances are much worse than mine =D

And the dreaded cliffhanger, ahh, how I love and hate them. I'm on the edge of my seat. My worry for Ben is actually surprising.

The last sentence broke my heart.

And what's with that Clive thing? Gah!

I would comment on the NaNoWriMo thing, but I'm clueless of what that means.

So, I await your next update and I apologize if my review seems a bit scattered. I've never been good at it.

I love this story. I have laughed so hard in, well, a while.

screams.
this story is amazing. so amzing. all your characters are fascinating. Even Chance (I'm not a big fan of the T in LGBT)

Benvolio. Well bugger me sideways.

I HATE HIS BROTHERS

Aww, I'm super worried about Val...

Aww, poor Ben! I wish his food was quiet at least... especially that nemo comment... HUGS
Will he ever tell anyone?! I love his brothers and Rosie and Val and they care for him so much and he needs the food to STOP! No matter how entertaining it is...

Oh, that's so sweet! I hope Merc manages to remember Val after a while, they would be such a sweet couple. All of your characters are so lovable and your timing is excellent. I want to personally thank you for writing this story, it is head and shoulders above many on this site. *blowing platonic kiss at you*

Nicely chaotic beginning to school. I must say I delight in your characters, they are detailed, well-rounded, and believable. Your grammer & spelling are also excellent.