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| kelye 2007-10-23 ch 13,  | abusehello just me ... kvandep ... annoying you to update even though it's been a very long time ... I WANT MORE. |
| Seremela 2007-03-01 ch 13, | abuseWow, this is good, although a little smut never hurt anybody, especially some Sean smut would be nice... |
| Vannekande 2007-02-19 ch 13, | abuseI love your story! just read it :) and i think that the diary form is a very nice touch/thing.. keep up the good work! XD |
| minor 2007-02-10 ch 13, | abuseooh ahh! dum dum dum. Anne is crazy scary. Sean is mad hot...I like your story. I just hope that Anne won't give me nightmares. I'm imagining her pretty self growing more and more decrepit until she's a wrinkled old woman with crazy hair and sun damaged skin... it's like her true self...spooky. I presume that this is were major conflict is presented? maybe? no? possibly? iduno. Just go write ok? I mean, seriously, It's been, what, five days since your last update? What is your problem you lazy, lazy girl!? anyways...I'm not one to judge. Good job on your story. minor. |
| whateva123 2006-12-27 ch 12, | abuseokay this sure is a very interesting story.do update soon cant wait for the next chapter. |
| Megan.S.Lox 2006-12-26 ch 12, | abuseLol, I like Sean, he'd live easily in my town. There's alot of kids that do stuff, almost giving people heartattacks. |
| xtotallyatpeacex 2006-12-01 ch 11, | abuseHey, this looks really good. The chapters are pretty short but so far the story's interesting, and I really hope you update soon! :D |
| kelye 2006-11-27 ch 10, | abuseI have been waiting for an update from you, seriously. I don't usually wait on an update because I'll forget about it until that little reminder comes in my email, haha. But this is different. A torture technique, I'm sure. I like how you don't rush through the plot, and the chapters are easy to read and short. But this is a story that's got me totally hooked, so I wouldn't mind really long chapters. I love taking the time out of my day to read each chapter slowly :P So yes! I assume life is really busy for you and it's a bit too much to demand you update according to my reading needs (lol.) But I hope you take it as an encouraging statement - don't give it up, this is a really good story. |
| Dellarose 2006-11-15 ch 10, | abuseCongrats on another new chapter. Ha, I wish I knew what the 'P' in Sean's name stood for. |
| Dellarose 2006-11-08 ch 9, | abusePoor Sean in the cold. I hope he comes to his senses and doesn't get hypothermia (no need to spell it right). |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-07 ch 9, | abuseWow. Intense. What is this about Anne? The suspense is killing me! I want to read more of Sean ,too. Update soon. |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-07 ch 6, | abuseNo wonder emily said it wasn't grudge worthy. Bording School! AH! |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-07 ch 5, | abuseOh junk! |
| LittleTaintedOne 2006-11-07 ch 3, | abuseThis is getting good. I'm interested and am going to read more, I can't wait to read what's going to happen. |
| Dellarose 2006-11-03 ch 8, | abuseAh, fantastic update. |