|Reviews for Goth Cheerleaders|
| charlotte-the-spider 3/10/07 . chapter 1
I WOULD READ THE STORY!
| Orual 11/8/06 . chapter 1
Goth cheerleaders. That must have been one strange conversation. Strange poem, too, but good all the same.
I do have two nitpicks, though. One, "formation forms" sounds really strange to me; I don't like reading almost the same word twice. And "'Red and black.' She yells," should be "'Red and black,' she yells" I know it's poetry, but misplaced dialogue punctuation makes me cringe.
| silverrainfall 11/6/06 . chapter 1
I like this poem. I like the way you wrote the poem.
| Chocolate Trifle 10/23/06 . chapter 1
Weird. I like how you combined two totally different stereotypes. Very original. :)
| Victor Joseph 10/12/06 . chapter 1
hehehe i can so picture some goth cheerleaders at my high school. i think thatd be a great story to read
| Bong2 10/10/06 . chapter 1
this actually a nice idea. It could be both funny and artistic.
| not jackie 10/6/06 . chapter 1
that was refreshing... i like "hair of shadow, / eyes of ice". very cool. xoxo-xandria
| Zeela Ravena 10/6/06 . chapter 1
Very Funny and a good idea
| brokendreams21 10/6/06 . chapter 1
This poem reminds me of one of those 'heart stopping' moments in a movie when all you hear in the background is some type of beating...alright, I admit, that made not much sense. But I loved the line: '...hair of shadow'. I felt as though that was a creative way of describing something. I haven't heard that one before so you get commended for that. I really enjoyed the intensity of the poem. Great job!
Now, to go off on a tangent. The line: " 'Red and black.' She yells," reminded me of this cheer that my school uses. It goes something like: "I say green and you say white!" "Green!" "White!" "Green" "White!" "I say Raiders and you say fight!" "Raiders!" "Fight!" "Raiders" "Fight!" I'm sorry if I wasted another 30 seconds of your life. But I felt as though I should share.
Awesome poem again!