aw, its so sad... and satirical...

I like it a lot!

"Decidedly deceased"-Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

I'm short on words about this poem, and yet dozens of words are flying through my head to describe it. Sad. True. Hopeless. Elegantly morbid.

Bravo!

Creepy. But good.

Excellent in fact.

I liked it.

Sorry I was gone for so long D

But now I'm back!

"God Bless" as you always say!

Rowan

I would say at one point or another everyone thinks about commiting suicide. It's always tradegic when someone does it. Keep up the good work.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott

Such a morbidly sad poem, but well written. I like it. Keep writing.

amazing! i love how morbid and beautiful this is. it has great imagery. lovely.