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KaiaLeigh 2008-04-26 ch 70,	abuseGreat chapter, I hope you write more soon :)
KaiaLeigh 2008-04-26 ch 69,	abuseGood chapter
KaiaLeigh 2008-04-26 ch 68,	abuseGreat chapter. Cool another Odder.
KaiaLeigh 2008-04-26 ch 67,	abuse"WE DO NOT LIKE SKIRTS" LOL!
KaiaLeigh 2008-04-26 ch 66,	abuseI haven't logged in for a long time, glad to see some updates!! :D
Mikka 2008-03-06 ch 70, anon.	abuseI was going to wait to review until you wrote something new, since I just discovered this about a week after chapter #40 But you didnt update... SO I just want to say you are a wonderful, fabulous writer, who will get a full review next chapter... PLEASE UPDATE! *cry
the_red_leper 2008-02-22 ch 14, anon.	abuseI'm getting farther! I just found some corrections for this chapter. Paragraph 2 it should say "He asked what had happened" you have "He what had happened" near the bottom Ethan is talking to Morry "Like I said, we don't know you name" ...should be "your" Onwards!
Inarra Lake 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseCool, in a weirdly modern sort of way. Mage as a psychiatrist...fun... :D
Barraketh 2008-01-25 ch 70,	abuseYou's writing again! Good. =]
Alteng 2008-01-25 ch 70,	abuseGood to see you back. Bane is on a little hiatus as well, but that's January for you. Anyway, to your chapter. This is an amusing thought for you, and I said this when I bought the Inu Yasha bootlegs from China, but wouldn't calling a female dog a bitch be a compliment? All the same, I see your point, and I am glad you are not writing the upheaval in the Conqueror Kingdom went along smoothly. As for Quill and the others, Ehtan is being a pain, yet I figure he has been through a great trauma. All the same, I would think that Isabella would be the most eager to get on with their quest, since it is centered around her. I am glad you worked Norman in there. He must be a hard character for you to write much like Stephen and Hannah are for me. Oh well, looking of that next installment.
Alteng 2007-11-19 ch 69,	abuseYes, and I am still with you. Do I get brownie points for being with you before Bastions? :D It is good to see that Quill's family still stands behind her, but boy won't they be surprised to find out that she has done something with enthusiasm and she has been an active protector of the princess/queen/king during her time missing. Oh, and it is good to see you back. Missed you.
woeful sock of sadness 2007-11-14 ch 68, anon.	abusekenneth is a cool character i don't want him to be bad! more norman backstory! mal likes dresses! NO MORE CHAPTERS! ::explodes, but it wasn't kenneth's fault >3>::
100% sock 2007-11-14 ch 67, anon.	abusenew character! whe! it's been a while! :O i love the diversity of the dialects in thera. so awesome. now to answe rthe questions... 1. no, i don't think it's dragging, i can't wait to see how it ends! 2. i liked your characters so much that i needed to see the stories they were in XD
sock au lait 2007-11-14 ch 66, anon.	abuseoh wow, didn't think charles could get creepier, but there ya go. the details of the room destruction were amusing XD charles is lucky he gets such strieks of inspiration, or he might be in trouble. i already think he is ::confident pose:: huhuhu~~
full metal sock 2007-11-13 ch 65, anon.	abuseoh what a good arc, i never imagined isa (fierce puppy princess XD ) would 'take over' the entire enemy country and then go against charles. WOW. i mean, charles is one scary-arsed guy, but isa's done so much, and grown up so much! oh, i love the characters so much. favorite characters, then... 7. quill. someone had to be last. sorry, quill. her character's grown, and i like her a lot more now, but she's still a girl character, and i hardly ever like girl the girl characters (blame final fantasy's lame arsed girl characters through the years!) 6. anoosha. wow, she really jumped down. i don't like her any less, it's just all the other characters grew so much, and she was just sort of in the background. i still think she's a really cool and interesting character, but the others are outshining her now 5. hernan. i really loved hernan in this chapter, but he didn't shine so much. the other wolves were kinda cooler than him, but he wasn't really in the position to shine in this arc, being pierced with a silver arrow for an hour or so @_@ but i always like the wolf characters, and it was awesome to get to know what hernan was 4. ethan. he was low key in this arc too, but what he did was awesome. he's gorwn so much, and i've loved this character since the first chapter. ethan's such a dear, i love his sarcastic responses, and we really got to see some emotion from him this chapter. 3. norman. with norman's past, i really get to appriciate his new self. he's adorable, sweet, and considerate, with an adorable accent, and awesomely eccentric in every way. he just gets better and better, and i can't help but want him to do something crazy and awesome. i especially loved the chapter with him and isa. 2. isabella. her character improvement is by far the most impressive, and the one which i hanging on every detial of. it helps a lot that she formed a freaking revolution and took over a kingdom, taking penny as hostage with so few casualties. she's just so boss right now, and growing by every chapter. i respect her, and find myself rooting for her! XD 1. morry, of course! so one can beat morry's awesome sause, just DEAL WITH IT. learning about aldrick, and his family, and seeing his reactions to the situation he was thrown in, and the intense fight, and the troubles with his father's death, it was all too awesome. morry remains at the very top of the pyramid of awesome-ness, right ahead of bread. (unliek the food pyramid, on the pyramid of awesome, bread is on top, which is where the best things are. ::wise nod:: ) can't wait to read more, but i don't want it to end!!

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