|Reviews for Bastions|
| Alteng 1/10/07 . chapter 39
Ah, but can Ethan really erase 11 years of misery completely? Of course, we done know what Morry went through before. In a way, to keep the Odder's hatred of Charles and his woman (forgot her name) would not be a bad thing, mind you.
I see as well that you have posted Chapter 40, and I will have to go and check that one out as well.
| KaiaLeigh 1/9/07 . chapter 40
Great chapter. Poor Odder.
| ELF 1/9/07 . chapter 37
poor Quill actually has to work...hehe!
"Next suggestion" hehe...great part.
i love how Ethan knew the Odder but didn't mention it...
poor Morry...now he's worried that something could have gone wrong when Ethan erased his memory...
loved the chapter, on to the next!:)
| KaiaLeigh 1/8/07 . chapter 39
Hope the memory wipe worked out okay when he wakes up.
| Alteng 1/7/07 . chapter 38
Well, that could have been a loaded chapter title. I was wonder who is proposing to whom . . . the thought of the Odder and the Princess crossed the mind. Alright, I am a twisted individual, but you know that.
Yes indeed, Ethan is good at the lie. Hey, it is part of his job. If he induces lies into the head as a profession, he has to be a good liar, and i was wondering if La Camille would step in on Morry's part.
| KaiaLeigh 1/6/07 . chapter 38
Great chapter. So glad to have up back updating often again, yah!
| Alteng 1/5/07 . chapter 37
And here it was that Ithought Ethan only hated him because he was an Odder. So, how is Ehtan going to change his memory. Is he going to mak ehim think that he is dainty little piece, who has been dancing through flowers most of his life. That would be a major turn around for him. Okay, I'm feeling a bit weird tonight.
| KaiaLeigh 1/5/07 . chapter 37
Oh boy another member with a memory wipe, this should be interesting.
| Alteng 1/4/07 . chapter 36
Okay, got caught up again, and the emails are finally coming from fictiopress. I do wish they would straighten that out!
Anyway, looked at your pictures. The Voidian twins are kind of cute, and the loud mouth one has that mischievous look about him.
Oh well, I enjoyed this chapter, and I know that Annoosha will fix the Odder right up, otherwise it would be hard to write a dead body in the company.
I bet the Odder just loved Isabella waking him up, since he needs sleep so bad. He might have to bite her at some time.
I wonder how they are going to explain to the village about the explosion. Will they know that it was the Odder, or are they going to have to run?
| Alteng 1/4/07 . chapter 35
Glad to see you back, and missed you.
Well, it looks like the Odder is going to turn around. I like how horrible he appears. In any other story, a character like that would be some kind of monster.
It is strange how he really abhors being touched, even to the point he cna't perform his duty. He willmake an interesting addition to this party, and hopefully they can straighten him up. I am certain as soon as he is able to shake off Akeelah's influence, he will fall over unconscious for awhile.
| ELF 1/4/07 . chapter 36
yay! now Isabella has all six bastions! hehe...
i love the explosion...very interesting...
Isabella seems to be growing up quite nicely...
morry was great. he felt so guilty...
great job here! :)
| ELF 1/4/07 . chapter 35
I was really feeling sorry for the Odder this chapter...poor guy.
La Camille finally decided to be helpful now, did she? hehe!
Akeelah is kinda stupid...she just tells Isabella who killed her father without realizing that the Odder will know, and that there was a possibility for Isabella's escape...
Great chapter, very interesting and kinda funny...:)
| KaiaLeigh 1/4/07 . chapter 36
Well Im glad the odder is now part of the group.
| KaiaLeigh 1/4/07 . chapter 35
Great chapter! Glad you're back to a computer where you can upload chapters again, I was missing your story.
| ELF 12/5/06 . chapter 34
Great chapter! :):)
Morry is great, love him...
so they found Poplar Town...hm...that'll be interesting...
"“Isabella! I am wondering where you picked up such dirty language!” She eyed Ethan accusingly." hehe!
"some dumpy little hamlet tart…as Ethan put it." great description...:)
"In hindsight, they figured they should’ve watched every other opening as well." hmm...wonder where this is going?