Reviews for Nighthawks and Deathstars

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rust phoenix 2006-11-04 ch 1,	abuseI love it, I added this to favorites and you to favorite authors. You use great metaphors in this poem, and the emotions are strong from start to finish. I think I understand what this is about, but I can't quite put it into words.
meaninglessTears 2006-11-03 ch 1,	abusewow that's a really good poem. very interesting and very well written. u're a good writer. keep writing!
Orual 2006-11-02 ch 1,	abuseI confess, I don't understand. In my mind, I can't solidify what your poem is about, it just has a very definite feel. It reminds me of being half-awake, thinking nonsensical thoughts that hold some slim connection to reality. I probably completely misinterpreted even that, but oh well. I liked it. I did get something of out the poem, I'm just not sure what. I'll stop rambling.
Enchantermon 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseVery powerful; I like it. I can feel your emotions through it. Very imaginative, too. Good job!
Icicle Tears 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseInteresting beginning and a little twist at the end. I like the repitition. Again, the name is what drew me to it. Interesting choice of subject... Wow. That sounds really cold and impersonal! Anyway, I like it!
Jeex 2006-10-28 ch 1,	abuseI love this it so ...deep and very well written. It was realistic too I could use my imagination and your desciption an really imagine whta was gonna on. I really really love this it's so a favorite. Thanks for the review on my poem.
crisscross-cat 2006-10-24 ch 1,	abuseThe metaphors and comparisons in this are great. You've really captured the mood here. Great job! By the way, thank you so much for your comments and support! It's very much appreciated. ^.^
Chemically Induced 2006-10-21 ch 1,	abuseSigh ah man, i like it. a lot. i got swept in by the endless chant sound and fury of this poem. its long, yeah, and that daunted me, but it climaxes wonderfully. "destroying broken thoughts that scurry/ Away.", "And the nighthawks rejoice as they played God.", and the ending lines in parentheses inspired such envy! :p i loved it. its so deep, full of anger and languishing in hate. and your command of language is almost unheard of. logophiles like us are rarities in these literarily lackluster days. never stop writing. :) love, c.induced.
riotmaker 2006-10-19 ch 1,	abuseoh. god. this. is. amazing. like beyond gorgeous. and the last three lines. just about killed me. with how beautiful it is. xoxo
brokenaura 2006-10-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is wonderful. I like the flow of scattered thoughts orbiting one topic and the ever present emotions that flare to high peaks and then die down only to repeat. Interesting style...less angsty, more alive than what I had expected.
Terence, the Terrible 2006-10-11 ch 1,	abuse"And life is bubonic (Painfully swelling before deflating to nothing)" Just part of the reason I'm favoriting this right this second. BEAUTIFUL. It's so deep and passionately written. I'm in love with this.
The Intelligent Designer 2006-10-10 ch 1,	abuseThis was a very powerful piece. The metaphor used for the issues discussed were, as usual, very, very good. I don't particularly like the last line. I don't see the need for it. Make the last line "Before I went to bed..." Just a suggestion. Overall, nice job.
Operation Miranda 2006-10-09 ch 1,	abuseI understand the initial earth-shattering ideas of the piece, and then it seems to fall apart. The poem could be improved with distinct divisions between thoughts. There's some sort of faulty-parallelism feeling to it, but I can't put my finger on it. But don't get me wrong the imagery and the clever symbolism are very favorable.
BearHeart 2006-10-08 ch 1,	abuseAwesome as always. Your imagery is masterful.
Sukiam6 2006-10-07 ch 1,	abuseReally nice poem with some great use of imagery. I got lost in it somewhere in the middle, but still a strong poem that would be great if read out loud.

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