aww.. i want to know more about these characters... maybe you should write a story on them..! :D (Maybe after you finish Dare to Trust and Living next door-- the other two stories I'm anxiously waiting for you to update!)

Hehe. Sigh.
So cute!!
I especially love the last three lines. :)

I loved this. Actually it seems like something I would do. I'd have all these thoughts in my head and would be too scared to say anything out loud, especially when it comes to a guy I like.

What exactly did he mean when he said he's fixed it? He got another date?? NO!

hehehe..

The stories cute but it's really a cliffie, can you like add anohter chpater and make it a TWO-SHOT! hahaha

when did you write this again? LOL... i love it, so dramatic... really shows your true feelings for a guy when you start writing stories about him? HAHAHHAH, so should i give Ben this weblink? :P:P or... was that over last year? i, recalling the formal event...

LOL,

Love lin

this is a very cute story!!

Very fun, cute story. I like it!

Aw!

aw! if that wasn't the cutest little thing i don't know what is =D

Aw, cute, I can't wait for your other stories to update too!

lolz! i really liked this. u should continue it cause u left us in a cliff hanger-ish ending

I was all disappointed, thinking it was going to end after he hung up, but the ending was really sweet!

Aww. I absolutely love it!! I'm ading it to my favorites. Definitely. *adds to favorites*

wa..this is so cute! please do update on living next door. you're stories are really cute.:)

Huh?

Hey, are you gonna update 'Dare To Trust'? If not, could you?