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| Guardrail 2006-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseVery emotional, I like this. I especially loved the lines, "Who knew love would ever rhyme with head-on collision?". My only criticizm would be that it was a bit choppy and didn't flow very well. I liked it, however, I can tell thought definatley went into this. Great work, and definatley write more. |