FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| satin.x.and.x.stitches 2008-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow. Absolutely beautiful. I'm in love with your imagery and I adore how the poem flows so perfectly. It's original and lovely. I'm glad I stumbled across this. |
| Stella Grimshaw. 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, I can't really begin with this. I just love how you stated everything, it was just so amazing. I'd quote something but I'd quote the entire poem. I basically loved it. Hands down loved it. |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I really liked it. Great job! |
| summerbee 2007-05-23 ch 1, | abusei hope this doesn't sound horrible but when i realized it was set in a waffle house, oh my god, i think i fell in love. that. that right there is what we call originality. |
| Tytherpol 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It's pretty. You write well. |
| cling peach 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abuseWell, at first I was just attracted to this because it had the line "but honey, tinkerbell isn't tossing her fairy dust on our heads anytime tonight" and I'm slightly in love with Tink, but then I realized overall, this is just a wonderful piece. "my spine falling into the curve of your arm each of us aching for something different" That is a bea-u-ti-ful line. This is like heartbreak... but the heart was broken to begin with. I love it. ♥ Favs |
| Take The Stairs 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseSome words just jump out at me. Unexpected. I was left with a "WOW" on my tongue. |
| theoretically beautiful 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is very well written and I love the strong close. Favorites for sure. |
| Idiot Pilot 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it. The setting of the waffle house through me off guard, but it puts the piece into a different perspective. The last line is genius. |
| ThisCut-UpAngel 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant wording, to say the least. This is going on my faves. |
| fairytale failure 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's such a normal thing that you've written about (nicotine gum; waffle house lights; etc.) but you've made it into something extraordinary. Seriously, everyone is right, this is awesome. I have an obsession with Tinkerbell. |
| A.K.A. Writer's Block 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abusew.o.w. |
| alice is dying 2006-11-09 ch 1, | abuseOh dear, oh dear oh dear, I must be high to be so **-/happy/.. This was phenomenal. Insightful. Perfect and pretty and peircing (alliteration at it's best, right). So amazing that it's almost as if I can't speak or think-I'm a poet and all my words have dried up or fallen away back to dust-from dust came lust, and from lust come love, or so says the raving priest in the back room. This poem ** owns. Awesome, just awesome. ♥ Alice |
| Guardrail 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and detailed, I absolutely love this piece. Amazing imagry, well written. Great work and keep writing. |
| cocaine and cherries 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseoh. word **. crazy. you've got mega talent, Jess. |