I really feel this should be edited more; the lack of "proper" punctuation/capitalisation - of course it's not as important as what you're saying, but it kinda makes your words catch and hiccup. There is no distinction between the different thoughts, and the flow is actually interrupted by its own freedom. Ironic I guess. I enjoyed the subject though.

Jack

wow, that was amazing. i don't even know where to start.
it was just perfection.

love it
my favourite line was the glitter & temporary valentines happiness.

i have followed your poetry since i began publishing on fictionpress about five years ago.

i love it, keep on babe this is the sweet shit that inspires.

your imagery is violent. its like your forcing yourself down the audiences throat and that beauty.

never let this end my dear.

I read this once before, and I really enjoyed it, but I never got the chance to review, so I just wanted to let you know that this is an excellent poem. I really liked it.

Oh wow.

Absolutely beautiful. I'm in love with your imagery and I adore how the poem flows so perfectly. It's original and lovely.

I'm glad I stumbled across this.

Wow, I can't really begin with this. I just love how you stated everything, it was just so amazing. I'd quote something but I'd quote the entire poem. I basically loved it. Hands down loved it.

That was really good. I really liked it. Great job!

i hope this doesn't sound horrible but when i realized it was set in a waffle house, oh my god, i think i fell in love. that. that right there is what we call originality.

I really like this.
It's pretty.
You write well.

Well, at first I was just attracted to this because it had the line "but honey, tinkerbell isn't tossing her fairy dust on our heads anytime tonight" and I'm slightly in love with Tink, but then I realized overall, this is just a wonderful piece.

"my spine falling into the curve of your arm each of us aching for something different" That is a bea-u-ti-ful line.

This is like heartbreak... but the heart was broken to begin with. I love it.

♥ Favs

Some words just jump out at me. Unexpected. I was left with a "WOW" on my tongue.

This is very well written and I love the strong close. Favorites for sure.

I really liked it. The setting of the waffle house through me off guard, but it puts the piece into a different perspective. The last line is genius.

Brilliant wording, to say the least. This is going on my faves.