Great message at the end.

Lol. I'm everything in that poem that's 'wrong'-not skinny, don't wear makeup, weird...very weird. And I lvoe being like this!

I could go on and on and on about how I loved this. Most especially that last line. I think every girl needs to come to that realization that we don't need hypotheses or what the world portrays as beautiful to feel beautiful just as God made us. I really loved reading this and I think you said it well. And I think you showed very well how all girls (well majority) feel this way and sometimes even think like this. Great job! And keep writing!

Lacy

Excellent job on this one.

I think I'm not the only one to think this is totally hollywood's fault.

PEACE

Rowan

excellent! i applaud you.

i personally loved this poem, you did a great job, really.

Who ever said skinny was beautiful? The most beautiful woman is the one you are with. It depends on how a woman treats a man determines whether she is a beauty or not. Good You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott