WOW. Just WOW. I'm so addicted to this story! I got really into it, and even though I'm tired and was gonna go to bed, I just couldn't after I started reading this! You need to write more. Like, right away! Seriously! I love it! Love it, love it, love it...

Wow...I could really feel his pain in this. This was really well written, and very emotional. Great job, I look forward to the next update!

GOD...

I love the last part XD. Atticus/Mel 4EVER!

Reminds me of Michael and Demon for some reason. Really makes me want to write this piece of fanfiction of my own story that's swimming in the sea of ideas called my head XD.

Anyways, yes. I'd kill for a friend like Atticus, so...Mel, get over it and just love the oaf! XD.

dude, that's creepy! Loved it, my house isn't haunted! Loved when David saw the marks and had commented on them..way awesome! Love it, keep writing this please!

Wow... just wow.
I went on the site on a whim in school, and your first three chapters were blocked by the DOE parental control, so I skipped automatically to the third chapter.
I'm not sure what to say about the story, but your character Melbourne seems to have some damage. I wasn't expecting the stranger to be so nice.
I want to say, in the most kudos giving way, that you are a twisted person.
This story gives me hope that I too may put up my more... aquired-taste stories. Thanks

EEK! I can't decide as to which one of these was my favorite! This chapter was really cool; most writers can't transition between two events without making the paragraphs seem choppy, but you did an excellent job with Alex and Mel. That last little bit, where Alex says that he has a new girl he likes, was cute. Bully-soon-to-be-lover was also an interesting twist, haha. I thought Alex would attack poor Mel!

I'm really happy that I decided to read this; I'll keep an eye out for updates! (BTW, I added you to my story alert.)

I wasn't able to continue reading this the other day, but now that it's the weekend, I can take my time in reading about Melbourne. Mel's so cool; I feel like a fangirl! I think it's cute how he's very sought after.

To lazy to login..*laughs*
I wasn't expecting the ending..great job here awesome!

I really enjoyed reading the first two chapters of this. You have a great writing style, with just enough detail to keep the story going. Mel's pretty cool; he makes a great uke. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this!

By the way, what's a PWP? I've never heard that phrase before.

I thought this chapter of your own private dream land was awesome! I really enjoyed it, well done!
I really felt the emotion in it, and I really felt bad for Mel's pain. I also felt bad when he realized that he had just been used not just for that time but perhaps all the way through.
Wonderful job, I can't wait to see what else happens in your dream land concerning Mel.

... *hugs Mel tightly* Poor Mel! So sad! *glings adn hugs*

good story, but... sad =_=...

*kills the evil David!*

*hugs Mai Lynn and Mel* Poor guy... it was so sad! *hugs again* sorry about Shadow...

Poor Mel, I can't help but to want to read more...

I've always enjoyed your writings. If you stop writing, I will come in the dark of night and slain you with out hesitation.
And you know I will for I know where you dwell upon this earth.

Take care, and do not stop the writing which is yours and yours alone!

Do Not make me repeat myself...
For your writings are brilliant, exceptional, skillful and wonderful.

Love em~ Poor Mel *hugs him and runs*

Same for other 2 chapters though this says one!