"I remain for my fleeting love –

My ideal destiny"

--Those are definitely my favorite lines. And I don't know why, but I loved how you used the word "floatsam" in such an out of context place for the word, I think.

Nice!I'd really love to see that painting and see if it matches the one you painted in my head. =)

wow, i like the way you used short lines to build up the words. its like your eyes are flickering over the painting.

keep it up :) thanks for the review!

Nice, I like this. The color descriptions really add something good to this poem. Great work and keep writing.