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Reviews For: TwoSided Triangles

Guardrail
2006-10-07
ch 1,
abuseNice! Emotional and vivid, I like this a lot. I especially love the lines, "(The kind you used to talk to late at night And pretend that they cared.)," they add a wonderfully creepy element to the poem. Great work and keep it up!
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