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recycle rhymes
2007-05-26
ch 1,
abusereminds me of my past friendships. interesting formatting. nice work.
she smolders
2007-05-14
ch 1,
abuse"you don't know me.you will never know me" -- I can't even begin to count the number of times I've thought the same thing or wrote it in a poem. I used to have a person that I would dress up for too and hope to share that one smile. The cliche-ness of this is sweet because we've all felt the same way at one point. One day, that blaze will never die.
dress her up in fairytales
2006-10-07
ch 1,
abusethe title -- i just fell in love with it. and this piece, goodness -- it's beautiful, amazing. the last line is powerful, i can definitely relate.
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