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| Jayjack 2008-07-22 ch 9,  | abusei wish Olivia didn't love him so. it would make her stronger. and more respected. well to me at least. |
| Jayjack 2008-07-21 ch 4, | abuseserves that ** right. thank you justice! or should i say Olivia? i love that girl :] |
| Jayjack 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abusewow Anne sure is a selfish **. ** much? |
| RadioActive-CupCake 2008-06-25 ch 2, | abuseBeautiful. |
| LucidRant 2008-05-31 ch 39, | abuseThere are many things that I wish I could post for this story. Truthfully, I read it some time ago but couldn't force myself to review simply because I didn't know what to say. But reading your comments on your bio made me realize that your talent DOES need to be recognized. Firstly, I would like to comment that until your story, I had never been a big fan of FictionPress. There was always a certain amount of effort I put into reading stories. Trying to like the plot. Trying to like the characters. Trying to enjoy the story. This story not only broke through my prejudices, it turned me into a die hard fan. This story is genius, and that's putting it lightly. Darkness, sinister romance, plus unforgetable characters and events make it one of the most thrilling (if not scariest) pieces I've ever read. Published or otherwise. I appreciate the work that you do with these stories and how you shape them into your own creations. Its absolutely fantastic reading your pieces. Please continue the wonderful work! |
| addictfordramatics 2008-05-30 ch 40, anon. | abusei'm glad this story is your favourite that you have written it's my favourite of yours too it's probably the best story i've ever read on fictionpress. thank you = x |
| kasey 2008-02-23 ch 40, anon. | abuseI loved the story! Just finished, and I do think you should keep having happy endings on these stories. Stories are supposed to make you feel satisfied, not depressed. xD I would never read a story that I knew had a bad ending cos that would be like purposely making myself depressed. The ending wasn't what I had hoped, but it was okay. I disappointed Anne didn't live the rest of her life out before dying. But it was a great story overall. :D |
| kasey 2008-02-22 ch 21, anon. | abuseI love you. xD I've read almost all of your stories at this point, and am at chapter 21 of this one. but wow. I don't know how you write so realistically ! You are better than even published authors. It's amazing! omg, incredible. I haven't been able to get into a story in a long time but your stories have re inspired me. Even my friends are getting addicted. There is just something raw and real about your stories that draw the reader in. I love it. ! |
| Llewellyne 2007-12-16 ch 40, | abuseA brillant story! keep up the good job. |
| Kittensinthedustbin 2007-12-15 ch 39, | abuseOh, God, I will never, I repeat NEVER be able to look at dolls the same again. I am absolutely terrified of dolls and clowns, and that fool puppet scared the crap out of me! *shudders* Other that that this story was amazingly wrought. You had me on the edge of my seat (literally) while I was reading. I found myself reluctant to get off my computer and go to bed because I was so caught up with Anne and Armand. Thank you for writing such an excellent story! This one is definitely going in my favorites. |
| Layla-darkest night 2007-12-06 ch 33, | abuseOlivia had better ** die. |
| Layla-darkest night 2007-12-06 ch 31, | abuseIf Olivia doesn't die, I'm going to be so **. I want the crazy ** dead, damn it. |
| Layla-darkest night 2007-12-06 ch 30, | abuseOlivia is a crackhead, srsly. |
| Layla-darkest night 2007-12-05 ch 23, | abuseArmand better win or a fanbase will go after a certain Lani Lenore. >_> |
| Layla-darkest night 2007-12-05 ch 22, | abuseAnd again I say: D= Liam... |