   AwakenedMoonlight 2008-03-11 . chapter 2The first part of this chapter was a little choppy, particularly when explaining what happened in the first two stories. But I liked the whole Ket-Must-Kill-Sorena thing. |
| AwakenedMoonlight 2008-03-11 . chapter 1 Sad little chapter. Very emotional. I enjoyed the first two stories a lot, and am looking forward to reading the rest of the Manumo and Miringa series. |
 Elle Marlene 2007-03-12 . chapter 3It's official: I'm definitely hooked on this series! I can't BELIEVE Kyros was killed! Just when Ket found him too...and I am SO curious to know who that little girl is!! |
 Casey Drake 2006-12-23 . chapter 32THis is great...
I wonder why they're so interested... oh. Kyara is part Miringa, isn't she?
:) CD |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-22 . chapter 31 Yeah... I'm crying...
That was... that was a really good chapter...
:) CD |
 amethystasheryn 2006-12-17 . chapter 29 I dunno what you call that, but I call it a cliff-hanger. :) I'm looking forward to the next...what, four chapters? And happy day-early birthday. :) |
| amethystasheryn 2006-12-16 . chapter 28 Unfortunately, we know something is going to go very wrong. We just don't know what. :)thanks for putting up chapter 27 so soon! I didn't expect it for at least another couple of hours. :) |
| amethystAsheryn 2006-12-16 . chapter 27 hm. I was wrong. Oh, well...At least they know where Kyros is. Waiting for the next chapter. :) |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-15 . chapter 26 Gyaah. Cliffhanger. What's the matter, did Anthro regain himself? Did they hear of Kyros? ??
:) CD |
| amethystasheryn 2006-12-15 . chapter 26 wow. yay, I thought you died. But you didn't, so..yay. Can't wait to see what happens next. For a minute or two, I thought maybe it had something to do with Anthro, but hey, I could be wrong:) |
| amethystasheryn 2006-12-08 . chapter 24 oh, was it that girl who was with the Manumos in the castle?...yeah. There were a couple 'its' in there when I think you meant to put 'hims', but I'm not sure. Thanks for updating so soon. :) |
| AMETHYSTASHERYN 2006-12-08 . chapter 23 I liked Ket's speech a lot..and that's a lot of people that would vouch for him, too. Eighteen people, I think? Wll, looking forward to the next chapter. :) |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-06 . chapter 23 EE YAY!!
XD CD |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-04 . chapter 22 ...Ok. I like that quote too...
Ee suspense. I also think it's funny that Ket-ket rambles when he's nervous.
HA! They stole food from BillyBully I?
:D CD |
| Casey Drake 2006-12-03 . chapter 21 So she is... a very odd person.
Ket-ket. XD thank you.
...may I PLEASE jump on Sorena?
Wait... "got rid of that fool of a mother..." NOT KYARA?!
:) CD |
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