DUDE! LINA! WTF? UPDATE SOMETHING!! LOL (j/k) I'm just bored and decided to (re)read your one-shot thing. Anyway, I forgot how good it was, you really needa update it, or post something up, you haven't posted something in... 2 years? Yep... well whatever, I gotta call you (eventually) UPDATE SOON!
~->LPN

Kore ha totemo omoshiroi desu ne.

I liked the way you described the scenery, and the feelings of the boy as the one-shot went on. Too bad it was so short! You've got talent, so keep writing!

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Hope to see more from you soon! If you've got more ideas for this story, or anything, then I think you should continue!
The Reverse Edge Blade

howdy companera,
good story, i guess you never updated it yet, eh? update soon

really really short but sometimes thats good, please update soon like, way good storyline

You know how much I like this story.

And, I say you should definitely continue. Now. ;]

good stuff lina cough cough i mean XX Sharingan anyways yea um oneshots are kool write more!