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Reviews For: Lost Identity

Le Pecore Nere
2008-07-19
ch 1,
DUDE! LINA! WTF? UPDATE SOMETHING!! LOL (j/k) I'm just bored and decided to (re)read your one-shot thing. Anyway, I forgot how good it was, you really needa update it, or post something up, you haven't posted something in... 2 years? Yep... well whatever, I gotta call you (eventually) UPDATE SOON!
~->LPN
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-11-13
ch 1,
Kore ha totemo omoshiroi desu ne.

I liked the way you described the scenery, and the feelings of the boy as the one-shot went on. Too bad it was so short! You've got talent, so keep writing!

Wanna check out my profile? Apparently, when it comes to interests...
Hope to see more from you soon! If you've got more ideas for this story, or anything, then I think you should continue!
The Reverse Edge Blade
jesse h
2006-11-16
ch 1,
howdy companera,
good story, i guess you never updated it yet, eh? update soon
Kiara Kye
2006-11-02
ch 1,
really really short but sometimes thats good, please update soon like, way good storyline
Halcyon Seas
2006-10-10
ch 1,
You know how much I like this story.

And, I say you should definitely continue. Now. ;]
Noir Fleurir
2006-10-08
ch 1,
good stuff lina cough cough i mean XX Sharingan anyways yea um oneshots are kool write more!
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